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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: NAVI55
I have found this poem...I thought it was lovely so I decided to sher...

We have been friends for not so long
We've learned to trust and shared a song
We used to laugh and used to cry
We've been together and learned to fly

Those sweet memories we both have shared
I will always treasure, I will always care
For all those moments we've been together
Are oh so precious, more precious than Gems

I wish no hardships and pains arrived
That blocks this feeling and forever deprived
For if I loose the inspiration you've shared
My heart in agony, forever will suffer

With all my heart, I do sincerely pray
That this precious friendship forever will stay
Deep in my soul, a vow I will offer
You'll always be my friend, from now until forever

Oh goodness.

This is so beautiful!

I'm rendered speechless. My eyes are all welled up!

Navi thank you so much!

You made me feel so very special!

Mwah hugs!!

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: NAVI55

That you do!!

Hugs back! Mwah honeyy!

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: NAVI55
20Th page...

Yes

No I can leave...To return tommorrow😆

To return tomorrow!??

Awww!!

Why you so sweet??

Huh?

Yes page 20! And I think 23 already.

Hayye!

You made this possible! YOU!

And Zanu!!!!!!!!! I miss you dawggg

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jasminerose

@jasminerose

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

AGAIN. YOU'VE GOT IT RIGHT!

Yeah Asad finds it classy. Pink has grown on him. I wonder how...*hehe*
Mwah!

So so happy! And every bit glad that you did!

Hayye. Awesome feeling!

Thanks so much!

Love ya!

Hey Farz

I must say I loved your story

First it was intriguing

Then there was curiosity to solve the puzzle

Then excitement to get almost near

and now when it seems all clear, it is the beauty and essence in your story that makes me so thrilled.

The idea in itself is so overwhelming.

Every statement had an emotion to tell. Brilliant

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Ha ha ha it was supposed to say blessing in disguise...damn never going to get it right

I must say Zanu and Navi's confusion had me laughing off my seat

You guys come on...seriously did you really miss what Einstein wrote lol

No river too deep no mountain to high Einstein I will wait for as long as it takes...and I know that index will come

Zanu and Navi hope I got you two on my side on this one

Sis. YOU got it right? Right? Phew. I knew you did. I mean. Of course you did. Of course. You got it even then, right.

Good good.

Yeah ZANU and her lipstick bit. And Navi was killing off my characters and at one point impregnated Zoya. Hehe.

No river too deep, no mountain too high eh, SIS? Hmm. Maybe.

Am not saying it'll never happen. Just not anytime soon.

Hmm.

Zanu and Navi YOU GUYS ARE ON MY SIDE!

But hayye!! So much love!! If only Tanvi (Kulfibai) is also here!

Mwah Sis! Love you loads!

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: A.Kh_20

reading it to see what is all about??😆😆

Haha!

You can also read to know why everybody is so confused!

And please tell me your first interpretation of it, before reading the comments to understand the story. PLEASE!!

KAY, MWAH!!

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: -ARLover-
I want links to ALL your works which are based on AsYa. Cool? 😃

All? I'm afraid this is it.

Okay fine I did write a short OS many many months ago.

You really want a link to that?

Okay.

Don't you want a link to my one other story that is on those other than AsYa. But has them. Just not quite on them?

And don't you want anything about Haider, my current obsession? No?

Okay.

And I also have written 4 episodic guides. It was during the week of their nikah when it was shown on tv.

But you might not want that.

Hmm.

Tell me.

Hee!

Mwah!

😳😳😳

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: jasminerose

Hey Farz
I must say I loved your story
First it was intriguing
Then there was curiosity to solve the puzzle
Then excitement to get almost near
and now when it seems all clear, it is the beauty and essence in your story that makes me so thrilled.
The idea in itself is so overwhelming.
Every statement had an emotion to tell. Brilliant

You loved it! Why thank you so much! I'm over the moon!

You were intrigued, curious, excited, thrilled AND overwhelmed?

*hyperventilating*

I'm genuinely touched by all your commentaries and your heartfelt and kind words to me!

Dil se, thank you!

Mwah *hugs!!*

Tell me, which was your favourite bit. And while you're at it explain why! I so want to know!

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jasminerose

@jasminerose

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: jasminerose

Hey Farz
I must say I loved your story
First it was intriguing
Then there was curiosity to solve the puzzle
Then excitement to get almost near
and now when it seems all clear, it is the beauty and essence in your story that makes me so thrilled.
The idea in itself is so overwhelming.
Every statement had an emotion to tell. Brilliant

I loved so many parts.

Most favourite would be the Hahehu momemt because she said earlier that she would find a way to say it.

And loved it how it made Asad overwhelmed and what all he says next.

Thinking of it brings a lump in my throat.

I even loved when he addresses her beautiful in the beginning and when he is let speechless as you pointed out when she wonders that she could scream back then.

Also I loved the idea of powered lens sunglasses. It was funny

Edited by jasminerose - 11 years ago