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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

wonderful!!! it was unique n really different from whatever I've ever read on this forum ...

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

That was amazing 😊 the last scene was sad but enjoyed reading it .. 😊

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: ash_ed
Unres-ed on Page 5 Hunz!

Page 5.

How I wish I was on it too!

It seems to be holding the best commentaries by far!!

You've commented so well!! I feel all those things you said!

This comes to show just how incredibly amazing Zan is as not just as a person, but as a writer and a story teller!

Mwah mwah Zanu!

Farz loves you so very much!

You rock!!

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Okay...

I seem to have found myself here...Again😃

Another word that comes to mind after reading your OS was...

ESCAPISM...

Asad was looking for a way out of his monotonous and tedious life.

And then he found a blank diary which he used as his medium of escape...

I am not sure if it was real or just his imagination which created a world that he wanted to be in...

A creation of that perfect woman which suited him to perfection...

He created moments which he wanted to see happen in reality but was unable to break free from the prison he had created of his life due to the demise of his family...

In that moment of slumber he found his haven of warmth and belonging...A place that he could call home...A place that called to his most elemental being...

I hope you can understand my ramblings...cos I'm not sure if I was eloquent enough...

Well I have more pages to get to, to make myself more clear😉