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Res...Unres...
Well, here I am a day later...And all I can say is ...WOW...WOW...WOW...Zanu darling, you are a genuis👏What a simply amazing composition this was...This gave me goose bumps reading it...Your words had a flow...A magical touch to it which captured my imagination and left me enthralled...The mention of a blank diary had me confused for a moment...But then when I read the entry that was penned...I of course was confused once again...The photogragh was another conundrum...On one hand Asad could see a female figure whilst the Doctor saw a picture of a younger Asad...How can a blank diary suddenly have words written in it??? How can two people see two totally different images...Was this real or merely a hallucination on an extremely troubled mind and lonely soul?This was just so surreal...and described so real...This piece of yours propelled me to an alternate universe, where dreams and reality merged.This was brilliantly executed and fabulously narrated👍🏼The way you depicted Asad and Zoya sitting on the beach, snuggled to each other was just beautiful...For a moment there I wanted to be on that beach, ensconed in that moment...That's how perfect it was...That moment when she said to him "Don't go", sent a chill down my spine...and when he said that he won't, he will remain with her forever, made my heart flutter and almost stop beating...Does this mean that I am technically dead? and I am writing this comment as a ghost😆(Oh, well...I always wanted to be casper😆)The last part...had me numb...That was totally not what I was expecting...I had thought he would get his happily ever after in this world...but how wrong was I? He had to journey elsewhere for that perfect happy life...An awesome concept Doc...Something to question the mind...You made me think once again...as if Farz piece wasn't enough for me😆Take a bow dear...You rocked this...I am sure I will be back with some more ramblings...Because there is so much more I want to say but right now all the words elude me...Mwah🤗
Are you serious?
This IS genius.
These are all 'I' as in me as in FaRz wants to write, but words didn't work with me.
Yes yes yes! I was most definitely enthralled too!
And thought thought of it as surreal!
Man Navi.
You.
You. You're so natural at this! DESCRIBING how you feel and expressing it. And the you dare say it was rubbish? My GOD!
If this was rubbish, then imagine what your version of awesome is.
Oh wow.
You rock Navi.
'Coz yo made me fall that MORE in love with Zanu's story, wriiten and told oh so beautifully!
I had the exact same feelings.
The one at the beach.
The one where she said don't go.
The one where he said he won't.
And the end left me stumped too. But I WAS pre-warned. That it would be sad. Even so, I was dumbstruck for the longest of time.
Of course I didn't have to rush coz FIRST PAGE FIRST SPOT was mine as it is, so I TRIED my LEVEL best to write my thoughts on it. But you surpassed even my comments Navi. Why you so awesome? Why!
And I know I'm speaking the truth when I say that's exactly why Zanu and I love you so very much!
Right SWEETHEART ZANU?
Right!!! Yeah of course am right!
Mwahhh!!
And thanks Navi for an awesome commentary! Love it to the core!
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