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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Its a fabulous work

Do write more

Thaks for the pm

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Hey Dear,

Wonderful, Wonderful! Very enticing, you captured my attention from the start to the very end.

You are a Fabulous Writer!

But what happened in the end. What was his beyond?

I am confused. Are you referring to death.

Well I have mixed emotions if that is the end.

Do clarify please...

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Zanutix

@Zanutix

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2
Hey Dear,

Wonderful, Wonderful! Very enticing, you captured my attention from the start to the very end.

You are a Fabulous Writer!

But what happened in the end. What was his beyond?

I am confused. Are you referring to death.

Well I have mixed emotions if that is the end.

Do clarify please...

Hey Juliet!🤗

I'm so so glad you liked it.

Well, yes. He died. Not because he was a coward, but because he had had enough.

He preferred to be with Zoya in Alternate Reality rather than being in his own world.

I'm sorry. I wanted to end it on a happy note, but I guess I didn't quite deliver it. 😕

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Zanutix

@Zanutix

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
Dawg!!

Am finding it so funny that people like my work despite not understanding it the way I would have wanted them too!!

I read this OS again!

I love his doctor!

Hehe!

I guess they're interpreting it wrong, I'll have to edit my comment!

You did?

I read your twice. Then read your PM. But haven't read it again.

I just came back home, you see.

And will probably study tonight. No IF. :(

So yeah, please wait for me. I might edit my comment tomorrow.

Love you.

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Wildy

@Wildy

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Love you Gaston! 🤗

You are awesome! 😃

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Zanu.

I like how the book is ebony.

And and and!! Zan sweetheart..*dawg who?*

It's totally fine!

I shall wait! It doesn't matter however long!

I shall wait!

And yes tonight you study!

There's always tomorrow and Wednesday.

I'll wait for you and I'll make sure your thread shall see more pages!

Navi and I are taking it slow here coz things were getting so hyped up in mine.

Mwah love!

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

So...do I talk about reality. Or do I not?

So soon?

Okay then let's talk dreams and alternate universe.

Zanu!

How did you do it?

Playing with the chords to my heart like that?

Hmm.

Asad actually was that stranger...

She fears him and is also very angry that he disrupted her solidarity.

And how did Asad know, in his heart and soul, that she's the person, she's Zoya?

Hayye.

And when she said in her diary that there's a stranger that has intruded into her space, her peace has been disturbed...how did you my darling sweetheart manage to make MY heart flutter?

And that bit on Asad saying that Zoya has called him stupid, when she hasn't really...the way youmade him think 'but that's what she meant...'

Amazing wala feeling I'm feeling Zanu!

Awesome!

Simply brilliant!

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Aw, Sister Jaan, why are you so sweet?! 🤗
You did? I'm really really glad. It means so much to me.
I'm not sure if people got it though, wasn't exactly romantic. 😕

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! And I love you. Bas! Keh diya na! Smajho keh diya! 😳

Thanks for reading/liking/commenting Sista! 😊

Even without the romance it was an awesome read, a very different approach and you nailed it.

Love you too sweetie

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Beautifully written, as always! You should know how much I love your work by now. <3

Write more! :D

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Now a lil reality check!

What?

Still very soon?

Chal, fine.

Another dream.

When he sat next to her at the otherwise lonely beach and she didn't leave though she did look angry and what was that? All flustered! By the close proximity. I so want to hug them!

And you!

I so want to hug you!

*hugging, squeezing till Zanu sweetheart can't breath, releases sweetheart *

I love it!!

Can I also sit with them at the beach?

What?

No?

Why not!!??

I promise I will only secretly look and not gawk at them.

Still no?

It's THEIR happy place?

Oh well, fine then!

Main kahan Jana chahti thi. I was just saying.

*he he*

Mwah!!