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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Oh my Goddd!!!!!!! 😊😳😲
Big round of applause for this superb story
👏👏

Awww Zoya suffered sooo much in the past. 😒

She hates men. Interesting story want to read more. 👍🏼

i have no words explaining this chapter
wait am i dreaming cause this was waY better than reality.

my god Zoya is drunk and she pounced on him. what's going to happen in the morning?

wow Zoya has totally lost it.

Lol the convo with the bartender was funny. 😆

He saved her from those stupid jerks


I hope nothing bad will happen when they wake up.

Omg what is in store for Zoya!!!!!

i am hooked on with this story

It is a very nice start and is a different story
i'm loving it.❤️❤️

Plz do cont soon and thnx for the pm

do pm the next part.

PS : Thnx linsie for ur pm too.

PSS : Who is the mysterious guy ?

Edited by rosyluck - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: SprinklesOfLove

Omg its sooo good
Sorry for not commenting
Was busy
But now im back
Really good
Plz pm me for next part :)


N u even update hidden souls ...
M dieind to read more !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Hey awesome first part 👏

I really liked it 😃

Poor Zoya she suffer a lot in her life

I hope that thing will be fine for her very soon 😊

Continue soon please 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: rosyluck

Oh my Goddd!!!!!!!😊😳😲

Big round of applause for this superb story
👏👏

Awww Zoya suffered sooo much in the past.😒

She hates men. Interesting story want to read more.👍🏼

i have no words explaining this chapter
wait am i dreaming cause this was waY better than reality.

my god Zoya is drunk and she pounced on him. what's going to happen in the morning?

wow Zoya has totally lost it.

Lol the convo with the bartender was funny.😆

He saved her from those stupid jerks


I hope nothing bad will happen when they wake up.

Omg what is in store for Zoya!!!!!

i am hooked on with this story

It is a very nice start and is a different story
i'm loving it.❤️❤️

Plz do cont soon and thnx for the pm

do pm the next part.

PS : Thnx linsie for ur pm too.

PSS : Who is the mysterious guy ?




I thought sm1 will guess who is the mystery man but no one ?
I m impressed !...
By myself 😆
I will update tomorrow ...
I think two updates in a row !

P.S. UPDATE HIDDEN SOULS 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Nice concept. Really liked the first part.

Is the mystery guy Asad? I hope it is him.

Also, add me to your PM list 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: -ARLover-

Nice concept. Really liked the first part.


Is the mystery guy Asad? I hope it is him.

Also, add me to your PM list 😃



Reveil tomorrow 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: akaswan

Hey awesome first part👏


I really liked it😃

Poor Zoya she suffer a lot in her life

I hope that thing will be fine for her very soon😊

Continue soon please🤗


Thanks :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
That's a nice start continue soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by Linsie - 11 years ago

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