Asya / Kabhi TS | The Mistake Turned Life | part 4 up ! - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Hey that was quite good..
Hmmm so zoya is AMD..
Good one
I lobdbher thots
Girls r no less than boys..
Oh so they so met...
Hmm good one..
Asad sved her
Good..
Oh god 20..
My my.. ye dono to gaye..
Oh my god d prank was so funny..
Lovely
Oh my god they dontnknw even each odrs namen
Hope nothing goes too wrong
It was lovely
Awesome
Lovd it
Update soonishest

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update!
plzz continue soon. 😳 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome story so far lovely
did samaira actually invite herself for the party and didn;t show up...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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"New Day, New Life but can a morning change a person's whole life ?"




The sun was up and she was awake . Her face had a smile she felt relaxed . She opened her eyes and what she saw made her world come crashing down in hell . Where the heck was she ? A sudden cool zephyr touched her body and that's when she realized she was naked ! God help her ...



She looked at the side of the bed and saw a man with bare back sleeping on his stomach . She shielded her mouth to supress the screem that was in her throat . She looked down at the white sheets of bed covered with dark brown shade of stains and the tears that were less till now exploded from her eyes like a blood from a nerve ...



She was lost in crying somewhere when her head pounded because of a sharp pain . She clutched the sheet over her body with one hand and from other her head . When she realized it was the time for her to rush she got up wore her torn clothes and when she was leaving she turned back the man was still sleeping peacefully . She picked the pen from the side table and then searched for a paper after a frenzy she kept the slip on wall and wrote. ..



" I am sorry for leaving leaving like this... but I should tell you ... the things that transpired between US...was just a mistake ...I-I never mean to hurt you but I know you must have a life. .. and you may not try to continue this so...I m sorrylast NNight was just a big mistake... I won't disturb you after this min ...I don't know you you don't know me...Please try to assume that we never ever met and shared a ...ni-night together "...

- - Zoya.


After writing she ran away as far as she could as fast as her feet lifted her weight reaching her house she slumped on the bed and cried for ages . She cried till sleep took over and as exhausted she was she didn't budge to get up and face everyone out there in her office and world ...



He woke up rubbing his eyes faster as ever and when he got the view his eyes went back to his side of the bed . Clutching his head he tried getting up but his eyes went on his bed sheet covered with Brown dried up stains and then he got a reverie of last Night he didn't remember much just the girls name "Zoya"...



He got up and got dressed and tried to find her suddenly his eyes glanced at his study table and there laid a note zoya's note . He half ran and picked it up and while reading slumped on the ground . It was the first time when he felt something for a female and after sharing a night he wanted to continue this surprisingly and somewhere in his heart he wanted to have a relationship with her. ...



This was no way to leave him like this ...Asad Ahmed Khan was no piece of cake . She will come back she'll come and he'll find her . There was no way she was escaping him - them -and fate...




"Zoya !...baby I m so sorry I couln't come to the pub...my mother got ill and I didn't get much time to ring up ...m really really sorry. .."

" Its fine Samaira ...go do your work ..." Zoya wasn't in a mood to argue and she knew it was all a prank.

" I m sorry Zoya !..." Saying this she left ...



It has been a week since that night and Zoya have started living a lost life . She had been suffering from certain illness she was quite afraid that what she thought if that was correct then she'll be in big trouble big trouble her every thing would be ruined . Her career her reputation her life and all because of this one night mistake of her she has done a mistake and she will mend it somehow...




" How much time do you need to locate a girl Haider !..." roared Asad it had been a week and he still wasn't able to trace her each passing day was like a hole in his heart he didn't even realise when he fell for her...


" Asad bro calm down... I m still trying and I'll track her "


He kept the phone in frustration and wispered a small " Where Are you ? "



Day 24 - :After the night: -


Zoya was pacing up and down in her room she was getting the reports today it got delayed due to some issues as she has gotten it done by a small diagnostic centre but now she really couldn't wait to know . Yep she was nervous but that paper contained her life she was taken back out with her reverie by the door bell...


She held the reports in her trembling hands . Just as she expected. ..


Name - Zoya Farooqui


Detected almost four weeks pregnant !!!...


She'll have to quit her job . Yes she wanted to keep the baby . Yes she has also fallen for this mystery man named Mr. Whatever . And so be it she will quit the job be on her daily expenses and salaries or she could visit dilshad khaala in Bhopal after sometime but now she will have to live . Live for this kid inside her. ..




Day 102 - : After that night : -


Zoya felt very lonely so she called dilshad khaala the retired caretaker of the orphanage...


" Hellooo ?..." came the reply ...


" H-He-Hello khaala ...mai zoya ! "...


" Zoya !? Ya Allah !...ameen meri bachi kaisi hai tu ? "


Zoya couldn't control anymore and spilled the beans and dilshad being so worried insistead on coming to new York but zoya refused . Seeking dilshad's blessings zoya kept the phone and sniffed a bit. ..




In Bhopal Day 102 - : After that night : -


" Khaala ? ...who was that ?..." came a male voice and there he was Asad Ahmed Khan.


" Asad beta you ? ...she was zoya the same girl about whome I told you ...the one with whome the watchman of our orphanage. ... "


Could this be true could she be the same girl ...


'' khaala do you have a photo of her !!!? "...



" Yes beta but its old ..."


" Can I see it ...khaala please !..."


Seeing his condition dilshad gave all the info to him about zoya along the pics. She was in New York and he had her address in his hands. ..


"Salluvian street house no. 53 fifth block ! "

Edited by ASYA4eveAAA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update!
loved it!
both have fallen for each other 😳
omg zoya is pregnant
mubarak ho asad miyaa aap abbu banne waale he! 😉 😆
so next update everything will be crystal clear that both love each other. ?.
plzz continue soon.
Edited by parakshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pms tomorrow its vry late and I m sleeping already 🥱 🥱 😆
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hmmm fast update...

nice...


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