Asya / Kabhi TS | The Mistake Turned Life | part 4 up !

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Posted: 11 years ago
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" Anyone who has never made a mistake has never tried anything new." ...



Prologue ...




She was quite drunk i mean very drunk when she reached the pole outside the bar for support while laughing that was already closed . She was with this extremely totally like sin hot man who looked sexy than ever and she was walking with him though a stranger she felt a sutell and mushy feeling about him...




" Oh my god that was hilarious ...My God i haven't laughed that much in years...wow ! " Said the super hot man . They just pranked a poor bar tender and were feeling like the boss of the world...




" I garantee that mister. ... umm...whatever your name is " . They were laughing like maniacs in new york city totally drunk above their senses and walking towards the parking lot ...




They reached the car and mimicking a comedy actor Jim Carry the man asked the lady " Well...Where the...hell is your house i will drop you ...you-u-u leeev with your...Parents.." . "Stop it you Bloody Jerk !!!..." . "Wha..."...




And before he could complete anything she was kissing him quite aggressively she wore a black low cut dress that reached till her thighs making it easy for her to jump over to driver's seat and sit on his lap comfortably while kissing ...




"Wo !...that was ...that was-that was pretty good ...you are an awesome kisser ...well ...well..wa..." Before he could complete she again took him by his lips this time in a gentle way . They broke apart after ages and then she said ...



" It'll be your place ...Mister. ... "

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Posted: 11 years ago
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In d e x...


Chap : 2 (The morning after...) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/104037845

Chap : 3 (Turning of life with getting along him ) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/104077022

Chap : 4 ( After the correction thing )https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/107466762

Chapter five is an epilogue ...
Edited by ASYA4eveAAA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intresting prolouge...👍🏼


Love it...😊

Waiting for nxt part so update soon...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting and please continue soon.
I am waiting for next part,please update soon.

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PRIYAKABHI.
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Interesting concept ,,
Do update sooon :D
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wow i love how yu wrote it ❤️

and i love the concept of the story seems
interesting. 😉😳

it sounds reallly amazing please cont
soon and dont forget to pm me.
😊
plz do cont soon
pretty please !!!!!!!!! 😃

lots of hugs from me for this prologue 🤗🤗🤗
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Gud start.. Hp it ll be happy ending..
Continue soon.. Thnks for the pm..
Pm me nxt prt too..
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the concept seems interesting
loved the way you wrote it
continue soon 😊
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