2#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala :AsYa FF(Ch6-10|#3Link pg1)

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Rupali

@HamariAduriKahn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#801

another amazing update! I loved seeing different sides of ayaan and his bond with both asad and zoya. can't wait for the next update!

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#802

Ankie...

Don't you dare to stop writing on AsYa ... they will always remain happy and content in our world like this

Coming to the update...loved it thoroughly though it was an emotional chapter but last segment swells my heart away...Haye how cute...So presenting you the cutest Asad ever...

Love you as always...by the way finally I found Asad in the flashback...😉

Update soonish.

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TanjoreGirl

@TanjoreGirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#803

nice update!i liked the ayaan /bhabhi banter.. and i like the way asad and zoya are portrayed in this FF. Thanks for the pm

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-Shormi-

@-Shormi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#804

i luvd da ud😳
i still cant stop laughing at Ayan's shayari haha😆
it ws so hrtwrenching whn Ayan ws telling abt his Bhaijan's hardship days
oh how i luv whn Asad's OCD hormones kick in🤣

ovrall its gr8👏

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Nour7

@Nour7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#805

nice update , i loved Mona-Raabert part
You and Salman Khan??
it was really cute
the revelation of Asad's past was good written
the last part i liked it ,i like the way you have described his return home
thank you so much for pm
and don't forget to pm me for the next chapter 😊

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@ChaiTeaWali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#806

unres

"Asad rolled his eyes as he pinched the bridge of his nose." Gosh the little things Asad use to do, I miss it all :( ... ps nice, you're very observant :')

and ruffling Ayaan's hair 😆 😆 ... this is what makes a great FF writer; knowing your favorite characters inside out and incorporating their characteristics into your writing... nice job for all the work you've done so far 👍🏼

*continue reading chapter 9*

How old is Ayaan in your FF? He sounds like a chota baccha 😆 😆 😳

Aww Asad's past :(

The video game reminds me of Zoya's line in the show ..."gaadi maine kaise seeki? video games khed ke" 🤣 ...you know what would be a cute scene? ...if Zoya challenges Asad to a game of GTA and places a bet on it (who ever wins they get to ask the other person for what ever they want).. and Asad acts like he doesnt play video games but still accepts the challenge after Zoya's nagging ... Asad turns out to be a pro at GTA and wins the match... if something like this happens later on when they're in a comfortable stage in their relationship then Asad can request for a kiss on the cheek as his prize 😳

Aww I miss the Mona-Raabart convos 😒 ... aww Asad getting slightly jealous 😆

Do you have chapter 10 all planned out now? 😳

Edited by -Dynamite- - 11 years ago

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Hoor

@HooriAsadMalik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#807

Thanx for the pm
asad ki story ne to emotional kardiya 😭

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ishka virani

@LilApple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#808

me too
kabhi magic life long
loved d part
its good zoya got to know about asad
hope for d best

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#809

OMG just read the last two updates and wow :| I LOVEE Asad and Ayaan, I've always loved the bond and I am so glad you decided to write them so much in detail. Glad Zoya knows his past and his pain and is set out to free him off it. Hope we can see more of Asad and his family too. Can't wait for the next update

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BeIndependent

@BeIndependent

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Posted: 11 years ago

#810

hey Ankie..😃
first of all srry for commenting so late..

i absolutely loved both d chapters...i miss asyaan ,asya n moburt..😭..but its ok v can enjoy dem in reading ff's..😊...Ayaan entry was superb...asad past was beautifully described..Ayaan n mature..😲😆...waiting to know what zoya ll do to take him out of his shell..😳😃finally asad returns home..😆...zoya is so cute..each n evry update of urs contains smthing related to food..n der description is always interesting..😆😆

loving ur work..

thanks for pm..😃