2#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala :AsYa FF(Ch6-10|#3Link pg1)

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#781

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

p.s. : What are ur expectations now from the story? 😉 Really wanna know 🤗 Expectation is the root of all problems, especially depression😳

Ignore the above line please _/\_

To tell you the truth i am happy with what you have given us in this story aapu, and i really enjoy whatever you write 🤗 this story had given me an alternate AsYa world and that's what i really wanted. So, as a writer, whatever you have decided to be the fate of this story is most welcome to me 🤗 Bas, i pray that your muse babajee doesnt ditch you before this is over😆

Edited by Madame_Noddy - 11 years ago

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Divya

@divya_asya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#782

It is fabulous..

Asad's past :(

Loved Zoya and Ayaan playing games and ignoring asad lol

Uff finally asad reached home, I'm relieved...I was bit scared dat something vl happen to him

Loved d present part

Pm me for the next part

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Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#783

reswa
Unreswa!!
that was an fantabulous update!!
so much of fun it conclude of!!
Aww AsYaan!! tehy share such a strong nd amazing bond!!😳
nd so does Ayaan nd zoya!!
poor Asad!! he had such a miserable past!! but still he manages to give all the happiness to his Family!!
glad that now Zoya knows about his past!!
i hope she will give him all the happiness which he deserves!!😳
nd the present part was also awesome!! over all it was a Superb Chapter
Do continue soon!!😃

Edited by pwenCezz_symrun - 11 years ago

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ankitabaran

@ankitabaran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#784

O god very much entertaining update...😆

Thanks for pm...😳

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anura7281

@anura7281

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Posted: 11 years ago

#785

acha chapter more of zoya and ayaan but with asads past too

update soon

Thanks for the pm

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Preeti

@FaultInMyStars

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#786

RESSS

I need to catch up. I missed out few updates! Lemme read first...comment will follow!😳

UNRESSS

Chapter 7
It was cute and romantic. She is slowly surely falling for him. Hmm..Sadz is here!😆 Oh...i guess I know who is her BF! Great going!😉

Chapter 8

Why are they so cute? I mean, seriously man! :(

He took her in his arms to her bed..and kissed her on forehead...She went to take a sneak0peak and there goes the kiss again!😳 I am surely gonna get diabetes...😆

The Kachori part... Good old days of Qubool hai and our very own AsYa! How jealous she got and how lovingly he was smirking at her cuteness...I have a big grin on my face right now. Can't get the image out of my head!

Edited by FaultInMyStars - 11 years ago

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shonajain

@shonajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#787

emotional part
thats Wat I Luv to read ankuuu
this was just superb
asad past life being revealed to zoe
lovely lovely lovely

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#788

Yay!, Asad finally graces his abode! The present scene left a warm fuzzy feel.

Asad's past revealed before Zoya, why did such a beautiful man have to undergo such a traumatic childhood?, Guess that initiated the transformation into the man he became - Theory of Life! 😃

Miss HD can we have Mrs Khan realize the cupcake is her fate sooner than later. 😉 😆

Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago