2#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala :AsYa FF(Ch6-10|#3Link pg1) - Page 83

Originally posted by: gowtu

Wow tht was awesome ankie.. Thank you dear. :)
I loved it.. I am so glad that you did do. :)
Asad's past.. My poor baby.. Na na he isnt poor, he worked hard and see he is one of the most famous and wealthiest businessman in the country 😆
He worth all the happiness in the world.. yes he does, he has Zoya 😳
Loved ayaan nd zoya prt.. Thank you it didnt come out the way I wanted but yeaa u guys happy so am i 😃
So beautifully written.. Thank you 😊

Continue soon..

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

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Ankie.. That was awsome...Asad had such a painful past... and he has slogged all his life... Ayaan is so worried about his Bhaijaan ... loved their bond.. Ayaan sleeping on his bro's lap ... Ayaan .. the way he told Zoya and made her realize was also cool...😊

Yes, Ayaan is very much concerned about his elder brother, hence he paid them a visit just to check if Asad was better or not. But he knows his brother more than himself. Asad is an open book for him.. He did realize that somewhere his brother was not happy, so he shared everything which was supposed to be kept in the dark for Zoya.

The whole Ayaan and Zoya scenes were good ... Asad and his OCD ...though he loved to see them get close and spend time... 😊

YES! He wants Zoya to gel with everyone, he wishes Zoya to love his loved ones like as her own, So Maaburt's bonding was very much appreciated and loved by him.

Finally Asad is home in reality... The way she held on to him and did not let him go initially was sweet...

Cause he came back home so late. She was lonely. And he is her sunshine They love each other very much. Zoya is still his baby whom he loves to pamper and he has spoilt her too much 😆 😆

On the whole a lovely chapter as usual...

Apologies.. wanted to write bada wala comment.. I was so very tired last night.. went off to sleep ... and now need to get ready and rush to office...

It is all fine Dii.. hope u had a good time at the office. 😳

Take care Ankie and thanks for giving wonderful story.. 😊

It has not yet ended Dii, i wonder if it would be really wonderful towards the end.. 😆

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy

Okay give me a huggiee coz this is the first time im unressing my comment is such a short time 😆

Leh leh mera bacchaa

Awww my Aapiee kisne bola ye chapter bleh hai... mainu toh achha laga 😃

Thanks Shona. Bleh and Cliched tha bahut. 😆

Thoda aur lamba ho saktaa tha par because your exams are around the corner you are forgiven 😆

Its standard. 😆 2.5K + 😆 do do 5.6K+ updates ne tum logo ko bigad ke rakh diya hai.. 😡 😆

I wish I could have written more, but you know how lazy I am 😆

That reminds me I HAVE TO STUDY 😡

Haayeee mere AsYaan!!! I love you mooorrreee for this!! I missed their bhaichara 😭

DO. NOT. TALK. ABOUT. IT.

Now Zoya has realized how precious a person Asad really is... I loved how Ayaan opened up to her👏

Precisely. She already has a strong feeling towards him.. And Ayaan being very much concerned about his elder brother paid them a visit just to check if Asad was better or not. But Asad is an open book for him.. He did realize that somewhere his brother was not happy, so he shared everything which was supposed to be kept in the dark for Zoya. The main reason why Ayaan came into the picture. 😆

And Mona-Raabert!! Yaaayyy you gave me my demand yippeee!!!! 🤗🥳

I hope I did justice. 😲 It didnt come out the way I wanted though

Aur Asad ghar aa gaya

Haan han aagaya 😳

I love everything you write so stop over-thinking wouldja?!

Tere liye hi toh likh ti hoon re pagal 😆

P.S: Love you one, too, three, four, five..., infinity Aapuu 🤗

Mellaa bacchaa loves me soo much 🤗

P.P.S: Ee kaisan gaana haigaa?? Kal se gaa rahe ho 😲

U caught that haan? 😆

This is the song.. goes like this

Chhup Gaya Badli Mein Jaake

Chand Bhi Sharma Gaya

Aap Ko Dekha To Phoolon Ko Pasina Aa Gaya

Arey Maaheen Re, Ho Ho Ho...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=czVmVTTFcvo[/YOUTUBE]

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

such a beautiful update baby ...
luvd d way ayaan n zoya gelled wid each other ...poor asad felt avoided
ayaan told zoya everything about asad's past ..n dat was just soo wonderful ...
asad roared 🤣
n present ...asad pampers zoya sooo much

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy

Expectation is the root of all problems, especially depression😳

Ignore the above line please _/\_

HAHAAHAHA! I just did wanted to know u know. Cause that is called a clean cheat. 😆

To tell you the truth i am happy with what you have given us in this story aapu, and i really enjoy whatever you write 🤗 this story had given me an alternate AsYa world and that's what i really wanted. So, as a writer, whatever you have decided to be the fate of this story is most welcome to me 🤗 Bas, i pray that your muse babajee doesnt ditch you before this is over😆

I feel so very lucky have such flattering people in my family ki main kya batao. bengali mein kehte hai naa, nooker shongey tulona kora jaiye naa,it stands so very ironically true for my AsYa fiction and the original AsYa fiction 😆

Muse babajee... he ditched me long back. 😡 but the writer in me is restless so yeahh 😆

Originally posted by: divya_asya

It is fabulous..

Asad's past :(

Loved Zoya and Ayaan playing games and ignoring asad lol

Uff finally asad reached home, I'm relieved...I was bit scared dat something vl happen to him

Loved d present part

Pm me for the next part