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neilavni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

i am sorry people but what to do i am suffering from food poisoning will update soon

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neilavni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

hello guyz
sorry for being late
actually i update through phone
so give short updates
anyways here's the update

2 months later ...

Oh, love of mine
With a song and a wine
You're harsh and divine
Like truths and a lie

But the tale ends not here
I have nothing to fear
For my love is yell of giving and hold on

And the bright emptiness
In a room full of it
Is a cruel mistress
Whoa oh!

I feel this unrest
That nest all hollowness
For I have nowhere to go and I'm cold.

And I feel so lonely yeah...
There's a better place than this
Emptiness

And I'm so lonely yeah...
There's a better place than this
Emptiness, yeah!

IN BHOPAL
asad- ya allah ! ye maine kya kar diya
mein aise kar kar sakta hu.
maine zoya se vaada kiya tha ki main uska saath kabhi nahi chodunga
kabhi koi raaz nahi rakhunga
toh phir maine aisa kaise kar sakta hun
aur mera ...mera armaan
mera armaan
mai uske saath aisa kaise kar sakta hun
voh kaise roh raha tha
ABBU ..MUJHE NAHI JAANA .
lekin maine gusse main aakar uspe chilaya
aur usse aur zoya ko ghar se nikaal diya
aur zoya woh pregnant thi
meri princess ke duniya mein aane se pehle hi maine usse apni zindagi se bahut dur kar diya
main kaise kar sakta hun aisa

abb toh ammi,abbu aur sab koi ghar chod ke chale gaye
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FLASH BACK
after zoya left
dilshaad- asad jao zoya ko lekar aao.
asad- nahi ammi main usse nahi lekar aaunga.
dilshaad- thik hai agar tumne faislaa kar liya hai
toh maine bhi faislaa kar liya hai
ki ya toh tum is ghar mein rahoge ya toh hum
asad- main is ghar ko kyun chood ke jaau bhala
ye toh mera ghar hai .
main yaha se kahi nahi jaaunga
dilshaad - toh phir thik hai main is ghar se ja rahi hu
aur jise bhi mera faislaa sahi lage voh mere saath chale

all nodded in yes
that day asad not only lost his wife and son but also his family
that day he became a living monster

BACK TO PRESENT
Asad- kaash kismat mujhe ek aur mauka de apni galtiya sudhaarne ka...kaash

<font size="6">PRECAP
...A VERY BIG LEAP

i guess this update was longen than before
but for next update i want more likes and comments</font> 😃 😆
FOR PM'S PLEASE BUDDY ME

Edited by pyaarasateddy - 11 years ago

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Az07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Nice part
Asad s regretting but isn't it too late now?
A big leap? I hope not so big like in QH

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neilavni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

a very big
but not very big

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DancingBell

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Oh my god...Shivani I hav read this before...Really nice story...I love it...continue soon n pm the nrxt update...

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

nice part😃

Asad is now regretting, what will happen nxt

looking 4ward 2 read nxt part

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RAJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Finally tereko time mija shivani update karne ko. Nice one. But its short. Glad that everyone left him. He is regretting. But isn't it late. Lets wait for zoya's comeback. But pls dont take long time now. Pls update soon.