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neilavni

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Posted: 11 years ago

hey guys i am new to this forum and i am a silent reader from long time so a idea came to my mind i am planning to write an ff where asya have a kid and are going to have a kid soon but suddenly on their sons birthday gives divorce papers to zoya and tells her that he only married her for revenge and wanted to make her suffer just like rashid was forced to. and then after two months he realizes that he did a big mistake but that was too late but after a few years he meets zoya and his children and asks for her forgiveness .SO WILL ZOYA FORGIVE HIM OR WILL THE HISTORY OF RASHID AND DILSHAD REPEAT????? so tell me guys is anyone interested in it so should i continue 😳

CHAPTER ONE AT PG 3

CHAPTER 2 AT PG 4

CHAPTER 3 AT PG 5

CHAPTER 4 AT PG 7

CHAPTER 5 AT PG 8

CHAPTER 6 AT PG 9

TEASER AT PG 12

CHAPTER 8 AT PG 14

CHAPTER 9 AT PG 15

CHAPTER 10 AT PG 18

NOTE AT PG 21

Edited by lovemysehaan - 9 years ago

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SimplySmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

so far sounds pretty good to me,

please continue it, and once you do PM me😃

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sweetgirl11

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice concept 😊continue do pm me

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Inquisitive_mind

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Posted: 11 years ago

Yes the concept seems interesting but remember 1 thing that according to Islamic Marriage Laws that once divorced a woman cannot remarry/unite her ex-husband unless & until she marries another in full sense of the word. Hope you build your story accordingly since they are divorced anyways good idea ..😊

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neilavni

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Posted: 11 years ago

thanks a lot for this information 😊 😊

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neilavni

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Posted: 11 years ago

hello people i would like to clear a few things

1:AYAAN HAS NOT LEFT

2:GAFFUR ,RAZIYA,TANVEER truth is out and they are in jail

3:FARNIK ARE DIVORCED ,HASEENA TRUTH IS OUT AND THE THREE OF THEM ARE ALSO IN JAIL

4:HAIDER COMES FOR BUSINESS PURPOSE AND FALLS IN LOVE WITH NIKHAT AND AFTER KNOWING THE TRUTH THEY ARE MARRIED.(HE KNOWS ZOYA IS HIS SISTER AFTER THE TRUTH IS OUT

5: NAJRAN HAVE TWINS .

6:ASYA HAVE A BOY AND ZOYA IS 8 MONTHS PREGNANT

7: NUZHAT IS MARRIED AND IS SETTLED IN AMERICA

8:SHIREEN IS DEAD (DUE TO SOME DISEASE)

DILSHAD ,RASHID,BADIBI,ASYA,HAIRA,HAIDER AND NIKHAT, NAJRAN ALL OF THEM LIVE IN SM

DO LET ME KNOW ABOUT UR REVIEWS
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RAJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice concept. But i have some requests. 1) dont make asya r divorced because in islamic law if divorce happened then zoya have to married some else which i dont able to bear. So pls dont make divorce completely. 2) pls dont give any zoya ayan angle. I cant tolerate them together. 3) dont make the chapters r pain ful, specially dont give too much pain to zoya. 4) after asad's betrayal i want zoya as a very very very strong man who loves her kids but cold hearted for other. 5) want a very very very hard repent of asad. 6) lastly dont make it sad one. I want happy ending. I hope u dont disappoint me. So write it soon and do pm me

Edited by RAJLUVASYA - 11 years ago

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neilavni

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Posted: 11 years ago

thank u i will try my best but u have to cope up yes zoya will be astrong woman but for first few chapters it will be painful

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ChipChipiBhaalu

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Posted: 11 years ago

Concept is nice.

How can Asad do dis to Zoya after so much? He is a jerk who even traded her. Plz, make Zoya slap him. Don't just make her cry cuz in many stories Asad is shown as a jerk n Zoya as a weak. Plz don't make Zoya forgive him easily like always cuz its shown in many stories. Plz make Zoya not letn Asad meet their kids cuz he left her n thrm by betraying them for his own selfish reason. How can Asad do dis wid Zoya or anyone-playing wid her emotions, using her for sex n then throwing her like a dirt? Don't make make Zoya cry n forgive him in a second like she always do cuz Asad has turned out to be a asshole.

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neilavni

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Posted: 11 years ago

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thanku but for that u will have to wait coz as i told first few chapters will be sad . by the way tell me how do all of u think about niha(nikhat and haider as couple