TS : Lucky or Unlucky Asad ?? - Part 2 - 5/April/2014

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vinita459

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Arre... Vinitha.. Am glad you liked it...Ya Asad is a lucky chap to know that the person whom he loves or is crazy about is crazy about him since so many years...😊

Main questions toh answer kiya nahin
Will u write second part for this.
I will look forward to it 😊

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indu333

@indu333

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

awesome,,, i really liked the os...

asad film star and all...😛

i really want you to continue this,, it was a nice concept...

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

That was a cruel end! 😒 This concept has the potential for more chapters! 😳

"Ayaan took Asad to Zoya's room... Asad was dumbstruck... The room was full of his posters ...Ayaan took out a file from one of the drawers in the table and gave it to Asad..." 😲

"It had his snaps from his first movie... All his details...A smile spread across Asad's face ..."

"...Aapi would get upset whenever the news of your ill health would be out... She would pray for your speedy recovery..." ❤️

Beautiful!

Lovely writing! 👏

Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago

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rockstar_16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

i sooo sooo loved it

awesome os😉

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Miss-Appy

@Miss-Appy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Thank you so much Bano.. but why are you online dear.. ?? You need to study right ?? Please.. Please study well... and good luck for that.. .

Am glad you liked it..😊

Welcome ! 😳
I comeby sometimes sometimes when i get bored by studies i come and relax here 😉
With ur prayers Insha Allah everything would go well 😳
Thank you! 🤗

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treasure11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

It was a sweet one 😳

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Thanks Ankie.. Am glad you liked it.. 😊 oh yes.. I am so addicted.. I am not able to stop myself from writing.. 😊... I have a presentation to prepare for Monday for a customer visit and look at me sitting and writing stories..

Hota hai dii hota hai 😆 When i have my exams lined up, i find all the plots flooding up in my brain. 😆 and the crave is so hard that i cant even resist it. 😆 all the best am sure it will go very well 😳

oh really you wanted to send a note to write SS.. So sweet of you Ankie.. Thank you so much.. 😊 Take care and good luck for your exams.. love you.. 😊

NO EXAMS TILL MAY 😎 hopefully I will be able to finish my SS meanwhile 😆

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SimplySmile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Brother clash🤣

What gul khan couldn't do you did🤣

But seriously you cannot just end it there, you have to get them together, you just have to, it cannot be an asya story if they don't unite please please please write a part 2

Edited by SimplySmile - 11 years ago

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Azraa

@Azraa01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Can I request a part 2.. Would love to see Zoya's reaction when she finds Asad in her room.. A bit of Asya romance as well will be thoroughly enjoyed..