TS : Lucky or Unlucky Asad ?? - Part 2 - 5/April/2014 - Page 6

Originally posted by: p_s05

That was a cruel end! 😒 This concept has the potential for more chapters! 😳

"Ayaan took Asad to Zoya's room... Asad was dumbstruck... The room was full of his posters ...Ayaan took out a file from one of the drawers in the table and gave it to Asad..." 😲

"It had his snaps from his first movie... All his details...A smile spread across Asad's face ..."

"...Aapi would get upset whenever the news of your ill health would be out... She would pray for your speedy recovery..." ❤️

Beautiful!

Lovely writing! 👏

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Welcome ! 😳
I comeby sometimes sometimes when i get bored by studies i come and relax here 😉
With ur prayers Insha Allah everything would go well 😳
Thank you! 🤗

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Originally posted by: SimplySmile

Brother clash🤣

What gul khan couldn't do you did🤣

No.. it was just a mention though I did not get to write about the Brother's clash.. 😊

But seriously you cannot just end it there, you have to get them together, you just have to, it cannot be an asya story if they don't unite please please please write a part 2

ok .. Since many are demanding for Part 2.. I will .. .😊 ASYA have to unite no doubt about it... She loves him and he loves her .. It is just the confession to each other missing in this .. 😊

Originally posted by: Azraa01

Can I request a part 2.. Would love to see Zoya's reaction when she finds Asad in her room.. A bit of Asya romance as well will be thoroughly enjoyed..

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Wow this was soo awesome Devika ,,

Loved it !

the best scene was when Zoya comes up with recordings of Asad-Tanveer's convo :D

I soo love Asad as celebrity LoL

If possible then do write part 2 of it ,,

would love to see their confession and Zoya's reaction <3

Originally posted by: Sanjhari

wow nice Story...I loved it...

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Ankita.. Thank you so much.. 😊... Well.. I know .. It was just a wild idea which came up and wrote it down in few minutes.. I will think over and write the second part may be .. 😊

Originally posted by: Az07

Sorry for the late replay I was a bit busy
Nice story but you could have continued with asya conversation & zoya's pov

Originally posted by: BeYourself

please do think about it Di... 😳