TS : Lucky or Unlucky Asad ?? - Part 2 - 5/April/2014 - Page 2

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

OS : LUCKY or UNLUCKY Asad ??

It was Haider's Birthday Party ... Asad had never attended personal parties during the last 5 Years and it was a surprise for media when they found him walking in to Haider's house ...He wished Haider, took a glass of soft drink and settled down in one of the chairs while his eyes were searching for HER... Tanveer was very excited to find Asad in the party and she walked up to him and sat down next to him...Though few media people clicked Asad and Tanveer's snaps, he was not bothered... His eyes were on HER who was in a black saree looking breathtakingly beautiful showing off her dimpled smile happily and speaking to Ayaan and one more young lady... Asad knew that he had to speak to her else he would go crazy. He got up slowly to walk towards them but Tanveer held his hand ...

I was freaking out until the part in red... I never want to read a ZoYaan (or even slightly ZoYaan) fanfiction but due to your writing I couldn't stop midway. Basically, I was freaked out just like Asad up till that point, then I realized the girl was Humeira. 👍🏼 Thereafter, I enjoyed the story😃

Originally posted by: BeYourself

yeay!!! i am first!! even before receiving the PM!! 🤣

lovely OS...👏

loved to see Asad as a filmstar 😛

i wish this story could continue for just another part where we could get asad and zoya sharing a conversation... 😳

just a request it is 😃

love,
Ankita 😃

Originally posted by: aksasya

wow nice Story...I loved it...

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

awwhh that was sweet short and so beautiful Devika dii! <3

am glad that you didn't leave writing which i feared you would :O :D

just 3 minx before i was going to pm you up for a SS n i got the OS :D

Originally posted by: vinita459

Oh you are so bad ... You can't do this. You need to continue this story. I will not leave your until u write another part. I need to see zoya's reaction and their romance. Please do write another part:)
It was really lovely and I was totally engrossed in it. I never thought zoya loved him and this was her reason to avoid him. Asad is indeed lucky :)

Originally posted by: gowtu

Aaawww tht was Abusuoltly awesome os.. So cute one.. She loves him more thn he loved her.. But scared to confess... Lvly os.. Thnks for the pm...

Originally posted by: PriyaKabhi

Thanks for Update.

It was very nice and different.

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(ASAD will be always KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY)

PRIYAKABHI.

Originally posted by: sasir

loved it.

interesting

Originally posted by: chahatmalhotra

nice story but pls pls continue it just an another part u see zoya reaction their conversation marriage romance love making al
love chahatmalhotra