SS: Something Anything - Note on pg 137 (14/9)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: goingreen

Yes please! Let's go for ice cream :p

Yay me! Let's go! high five

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: goingreen

Haha I love how creatively colourful your comments are (: Yup, he went to Delhi hahaha. I bet none of you guessed that :p About New York... well that seems to be the popular school of thought now, and you know how I don't usually go with the masses HAHA. But anyway you'll see (: I'm glad you liked it Mrina, and sorry for the delay!!

Awww... I'm glad you love the colorful comments! 😳 Ummm.. okay... I would want to see your school of thought! 😉 Sorry for the delay from my side too! 😆

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Mrinalini

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Finally I'm back! And here with the comments for Part 4...

"La, la, lalalalala," Asad began doing the stupid jiggle that Zoya had kept as the password of her iPad. The driver scoffed, and Asad cringed, but he was grateful that the driver didn't ask anything. Asad scrolled through her iPad aimlessly, looking through her camera roll. He smiled, looking at all the photos she had taken with his mother and sister, grinning away. And that's when he noticed that there were hardly any photos of him, just a few she had taken while he was unaware. That made him smile even more. So she was sneakily taking photos of him, huh?

HAHAHAHAHA... OMG... Did Asad really do that? 🤣🤣 I can so imagine the driver's expression to this! 🤣

Hell with you Tanveer! 😡

"Delhi mein?! Maine taxi ko isliye call kiya tha taake tumhe airport bhi jaana na pade, par tum toh Delhi hi chale gaye," Tanveer blurted out, her rage clouding her sensibilities. Within seconds, she found herself squeezing her eyes shut, realizing her mistake.

"Kya?! You were the one who called for the cab to pick Zoya up from the house?" Asad demanded to know, his voice heavy with disbelief. Snatches of his conversation with Zoya about who called the cab earlier began to sketch out in his brain.

"Nahi toh! Why would I? I said ZOYA ne taxi ko call kiya tha, so that you don't need to go to the airport..." Tanveer tried to explain herself, putting on as much fake concern as she could, as she bit her lower lip in worry.

Zoya called the cab? But she seemed confused about the cab herself. Besides, even if Zoya did call the cab, why did Tanveer know all about it? It made no sense for Zoya to inform Tanveer about calling a cab; it was a rather trivial matter to discuss. Asad was about to verbalize all his thoughts, when the can came to a sudden halt.

Finally she blurted out! 😆 Now to Mr. Dumb Ahmed Khan, It's high time you use your brains! waiting

HAHAHAHAHA!!!! 🤣 I loved the conversation between Asad and Zoya in the international airport. 😆

"Phone bhi kar sakte the alright. Aise peeche aane ki zaroorat nahi thi," Zoya argued stubbornly, as she crossed her arms across her chest and glared at him. He made no attempt to pass her the iPad, choosing instead to hug it to his chest instead.

"Yes you're right, I should've called you. Because after informing you on the phone, your iPad would've magically zipped through the phone line and come back to you anyway," Asad commented sarcastically, batting his eyelashes.

Wow! Sarcastic Asad? 😲 😉

"Not so fast Miss Farooqui. Woh kya hai na... while I was travelling here... I uh, woh actually, I happened to browse through your iPad. And um, saw all your photos, with Ammi and Najma..." Asad took a shot in the dark, and he noticed Zoya raise her eyebrow in amusement.

"Happened to...? Uh Mr Khan, mere password itna elaborate hai ke happened to ka sawaal hi nahi uttha. Khair, what's your point?" Zoya pointed out casually, biting the inside of her cheek to suppress her giggle as she watched Asad's face turn red in embarrassment.

"Uh, mera bhi photos hai ismein..." Asad continued, unsure about where the conversation was headed to either. But a small sense of victory began to arise when he noticed Zoya's face pale at his statement. Oh yes, he was well-aware that she was taking photos of him without asking.

"Yes, woh main camera test kar rahi thi bas. If it bothers you so much, I'll delete them," Zoya clarified, as she tried to reach for the iPad again. Asad continued holding it out of her reach, shaking his head slowly.

"Nahi woh... aapne mere... mere, uh, mere saath photo kyun nahi liya?" Asad finally managed to formulate a proper sentence, despite it being one of the stupidest things he'd come up with on the spot. He looked away immediately after taking in the wide-eyed reaction that Zoya gave him.

ROFL! 🤣

Ya Allah! Kill this man seriously! Please use your words wisely Mr. Khan! 😳 You need to confess your love to her! 😆

Continue soon... You've got more than your specified number of likes and comments, so UPDATE!

Love and hugs, ❤️ 🤗

Mrina

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Whaaa, don't get scared! Mein koi bhoot nahin hoon, yeh mein hoon, mein...wohi poorani budhi aurat. LOL!

New story, accha... dekhte hain what new dhamaka you will give us with this one. Looking forward, very forward. You know why nah... ;)

Shuru karen?

Part 1

Well, this would work splendidly! (What is she planning to do?)

He shook his head sharply and looked away again (Wrong answer...very wrong answer!)

"Nahi jaana? Toh yeh sab drama kyun kiya? (Ya Allah, aap kabhi nahin shudrenge nah...)

"Heads," Asad whispered into the quiet room (Oh yes, that moment...)

"That's tails Jammy," Tanveer blurted out (Can somebody throws this girl out of the house and give her an one way ticket to nowhere's land?!)

If he so badly wanted to send her to the airport, why'd he call the cab in the first place? He could've just as easily sent her in his own car (LOL, so true!!!)

Good riddance Zoya! (Good riddance Tanveer, yes...)

Oh Greenie! What a lovely first part. It reminded me of those golden QH days and those AsYa moments I loved. The whole scene kept playing in my mind while reading this part.

You have already put your own flavor to it by making Asad go to the airport with Zoya. She asked him several times but no, the stubborn and confused man he is, refuses to say anything. Urgh!!!

Okay so what is in store for us? Chalo, second part is not a secret for me since I had already read that one (could not resist...take that as a compliment!) Will give my next comment soon. Oh and yes, will not read part 3 okay ;)

Thank you so much! 😳

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Hoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Are u planning to update on a new thread? 😆

Edited by parakshi - 11 years ago

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Aashka

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Update soon...? Please...! 😎

Update soon...!