Asya FS : bringing you back home part 5 on pg 40

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 2..

zoya nicely done on the emotion part...
how she miss asad... and
how much it hurts her...
she loves him... try to move pass him...

asad restless... is fear of accepting zoya or
hurting her... now how he is going to say it...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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part 3..

asad foolishness... drove his happiness way...

now build very insecure zoya...

she thinks asad needs someone better in

life...

asad going to change that...

he got 2nd chance...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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part 4...

So all try to bring her out
of her shell...

to show nothing wrong the way zoya
see the world...

all 3 did ... but zoya still confuse...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: mooumi
awesome update dear... lvd it...continue soon.. 😃

Thanks

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Az07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: aksasya
Awesome update dear...I loved Zoya's decision...She is not a doll for Asad to play with...Her thought was rite,what if Tanveer's truth was not revealed,he would have married her...I love this story...

Thanks dear

This is exactly what I tried to say in this story