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-StarsLinedUp-

@-StarsLinedUp-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#671

FYI...the next update is going to be quite fun..so this time around..the next update will only happen on a new thread so for that I need you to get the comments upto page 120 and as for likes...I need atleast a 100...So do wat u can..

Now for the update...did u guys like it??? comment and let me know...

Points to share...

Both Ayaan and Humeira individually think they were at fault in the relationship.

Shahid if you've forgortten had just come from India 6 months ago, around the same time as Asad.

Rihaan stayed back..but he will be flying to Montreal aftrer the meeting..

The update starts 2 days after Dilshad's arrival..

I guess that's all I can think about..

O ya..there's no partnership happening..the culprit works alone..

And Ayaan and Humeira studied in NY and meanwhile Zoya was in LA..and she has never seen Ayaan..cos she was very bitter and destructive in that phase of her life..

Well that's it... Comment and like..and share your POV's..I'll cya in a new thread...n how soon..only depends on ur responses..and likes..

Once again...

100 likes and comments till page 120

Last 2 updates..my comments have helped..but this time it has to be u..I will still reply to your comments..but rest is upto u..

Bare in mind..the next update is all about Asad and Zoya in a room...some confessions..and connections..and some fun...after that..we'll get into some..death traps and money hustling..so stay tuned..and hurry up with ur comments😉

Cya for now...

Edited by -StarsLinedUp- - 11 years ago

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#672

Originally posted by: -StarsLinedUp-

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LOL...yes I am for real..n I eat nothing special😆

yes Imran isone of the 2 guys and his real name is Abdul..

N wow..u feel like ur watching a movie..now thats a gr8 compliment for me...I am truly flattered..😳

Humeira and Ayaan are meatn to be as well but things happened and they drifted apart..I'll get to it in the next update..

Gal u have so many parts that u liked...I am just like on cloud nine...thanks a lot... n Zoya is completly clueless..as to what's going on

Ayaan is the good guy..so u have 2 guys remaining..

Chalo..thank u very much for appreciating my story..enjoying th esuspense...and having such wonderful things to say.,..I am really very happy reading it all..

Keep readin and commenting gal..n I will reveal the villan soon😉

🤗

i was thinking t aks u for an updt nd u updtd..
Thnk u..
Ll read nd cmmnt

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Divya.S.R

@Divya.S.R

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#673

Res will unres soon.. 😃

Sorry for the late unres

Nice Mommy dearest is interrogating Asad😆... Poor Asad.. He is trying to run away from all these feelings but Dilshad is so bent on making him face them unintentionally.. 👏

Awww... Ayaan and Humaira had a misunderstanding poor things.. Hope they get together soon😃..

So Ayaan has seen Zoya as a bad girl!! Now Asad is slowly getting to know all the phases of her life.. 😆

I still don't understand how you deal with her. I mean the way she was blasting at you on the airport day before. 🤣 Hahahaaa.. you don't have to worry Ayaan.. Asad's just getting a heads up of what he is gonna get into.. so gives him time to prepare...😆

Her outburst doesn't bother me, cos she doesn't bother me'. Asad tried brushing this converstation off You are so in denial Asad..😒

See ammi got it correct😊... Seriously I praise you a bit and you make me change it.. what's the need to find girl for him😡..

Awww poor Zoya.. Feel so bad for.. Loved her and Gaffur's convo.. Gaffur has a feeling that something might be brewing between Asad and Zoya.. 😆

she called for Asad for help in her nightmare.. Sure sign that he is her knight in 3 piece suit.. Yeesh what a husband, not even bothered about her😡.. aww Asad called her on time..😳 He could even sense that she is disturbed... *sigh* someone give me a rod so that I could hit both of them on their heads and clear their doubts about the other..😡

Yuck this Alia chick is disgusting😡... totally despo.. but atleast she made Zoya get jealous😆..

There will be success always when Asad and Zoya are together.. known fact.. 😳

Ayaan keeps talking to Shahid casually... now why am I feeling that Shahid could also be a part of killing Zoya.😕.. Given her a quick death, a piece of land to be buried in.But now she would suffer. He would make sure she would see her death😲. Asad is there to save her always dude.. and he'll surely make a pulp out of you when he finds you.. 😡

he stood up and locked his bag.This bag was his lifeline. I remember Rihaan too being obssesed about his bag when Ayaan had sneaked into Zoya's cabin..

heheheehe Zoya in the usual form itself is fun to read about now that she is drunk its gonna be even fun.. 🤣😳

Don't worry sir...We wont share anything about your girlfriend...

Shut up... 😆😳 so true...

Edited by divram - 11 years ago

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#674

Aashna.. Amazing update.. I just loved it.. 😊 So our Ms. Faroouqi gets a place in his dreams as well.. and he is troubled after he got to know about her dreams... 😊

Ayaan and Asaad's conversation about Humeira and Zoya's past was good... Got to know how much Zoya has been going through since an early age..

Dilshaad is a cool mom.. but Alia.. now why her ??

Zoya's talk with her dad and his thoughts were also good.. Looks like everybody wants Asad and Zoya to be together but she is married and that is the only problem...

Her nightmare and Asad again in her dream and the way she got his call for what so ever reason.. was beautifully written.. hats of to you for that scene .. 😊

So they did it again to pull off another buisness deal... and now Asad is there again to her rescue... Well some sort of confession coming up next.. am so eager to read more.. 😊

and this culprit is sure trying his ways to spoil Zoya's life.. but Asad her protector is there for her...😊

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#675

I need to rush to office now.. but I promise to come back in the evening and give a bada wala comment ...😊

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aman

@aman93

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#676

amazing update... asad zoya in a room
precap is too gud
cant wait

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Heena

@aarzoo50

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#677

amazing update aashna...
it was too good...
i dont like this rihaan... infact i think nobody likes him n now u hv addad another person there... Alia... i hope i dont hv to see her often...
ayaan n humairas love story had to wait... bcz in nxt update u r giving us AsYa only...
zoyas dream was all about her choosing a wrong path... thats marrying rehaan n that shes in danger if she continues vd it... n then asad vl b there...
rihaan too going to Montreal... waha usse kya dekhne ko milega... thinking...
n abt shahid... is it that there r 2 different people 1 trying to harm zoya ( rihaan) n other asads culprit ( shahid)
continue soon

Edited by aarzoo50 - 11 years ago

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#678

Awesome update dear.

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marcoe

@marcoe

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#679

Really nice update😃

Oh dilshaad mommy I've always loved u

Such a smart mom😳

I wish she puts some sense in asad too😡

And gaffur too

So he also approves of asad👏

Yeayyy

Come on make zoya and rihaan divorce

I want asya😭

The story is just turning out to be more and more interesting😉😲

I dnt know what the killer is planning😲

I hope asad saves zoya then😕 ...too😉

Hahhaha. ...the bar scene was hilarious🤣

I can't stop laughing😆😆

Plzzz update soon

I can't wait to read what happens next

Asya. ...One room...zoya drunk...irritated asad

Hahahahha🤣🤣

Update soonishhh🤗

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#680

Hello!

Finally got the time to catch up with this story.

I got busy and to top it I even lost interest on the forum now.Anyways here I am;)

Frankly I would admit that this story did have a slow pace initially but now you have made it so intriguing 😃

Im glad you did not give up on this story and took it as a challenge because you are a phenomenal writer di 😃

Okay about the update the bar scene was really very amusing and im looking forward to the next update.The heart to heart talk is due for long now and since zoya is drunk im sure we are in for some confessions and revealations as well ,like you said.

The old Zoya that is Zeenat's Zoya is locked up somewhere inside this obnoxious Zoya.That old Zoya is still longing for true love and she unknowingly tries to find it in Rehaan and is always disappointed. She channels her disappointment into swearing and shouting at other people.Your potrayal of this concept is fabulous.

Before I read this update It did cross my mind that Ayaan is not the culprit amd he is just looking for something else. Im anxiously waiting for humeira and Ayaan's meeting.

I do strongly feel that Rehaan has to be the mastermind because he was worried about his bag when Ayaan had been caught in Zoya's office and in thid update you mentioned that the bag is the lifeline of the culprit.

No partnership then why is Shahid on a revenge spree is a mystery to me.

I do remember the red file you had mentioned in the initial updates but im not able to establish the connection.

Also the culprit is hell bent on murdering Zoya only because Zoya is close to his secret.He can go to any extent well its about money and greed so that is expected.

Would love to see more of Dilshaad and Zoya and Dilshaad and Asad filling the void in poor Zoya's life:)

Gaffur would want Zoya to hold onto Rehaan but he wont create problems for Asya because he wants the best for Zoya right?

Too many questions unanswered but still a bit clear picture than before.

I probably should get going.See you on your new thread di.

🤗 ❤️

Edited by --Natasha-- - 11 years ago