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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#681

Wow..
Tht was fab...
I loved it to d the core..
Totally awesome prt..

Asad nd ayaan..
Humi nd zoya pst prt was gud..
Nd dillu awww so sweet she is.
She undrstnd zoya very well in one meet only..

K so ayaan knw her before..
Nd humi also thinks tht she was also wrong at her place..
Hmm intrstng..

Liked gaffur nd zoya's phone conversation..
Gaffur sensed sumthng in between thm through zoya's words..
But he knw THAT cnt be happen..
Nd he was r8 at his place..

Nd zoya's dream..
Tht was my fvrt prt in dis updt..
Bina kch kahe bahut kch khdiya..
Awesome prt..

Nd r8 thn he called her..
I was like *awww*
nd he sensed sumthng wrong with her..

She got to knw abt asad date..
Nd she was not at all hpy to hear it..

Y zoya y y y !
Loll..

O m g..
He download some documents from zoya's lappy..
Wht gone hpaen nw.. ?
Nd the culprit wants to kill zoya !
Woh bhi buri tarah se..
Nw i m damn sure its rihaan only..
The way she was behaving wth him..
He surly fed of wth her..
Nd u said shahid joined the ofc 6months back only..
May be he has another reason to take revenge..

Nd ayaan tired to knw abt zoya's married life..
Hahaha..

Nd the bar prt was hilarious..
Ohh god zoya..
She nd her words.. :p

bichara waiter :/

aaahh there he was..
Her saviour..
He reached again to save her..
Jst like in her dream..

I enjoyed it...

So eagerly waiting for nxt one..
Want to knw wht ll she gonna confess..

Continue soon..
Thnk for the pm..

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#682

I m being greedy but want another one :/

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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#683

This is an incredible story, in love with this story, I just can nt wait for the next update, please update soon. Beautiful chapter, I feel for Zoe, girl is lonely and fallen for our dear Mr khan, eagerly waiting for the next update...It seems like Zoe is going to confess her tru feelings..I hope Rehaan does not hurt her..

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rajsmi

@rajsmi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#684

Nice update...looking forward to the next fun one :-)

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#685

wonderful...loved the update
continue soon

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#686

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jasminerose

@jasminerose

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#687

Zoya is such a mess creater, haha

Ms. Farooqui in Mr. Khan's room. Lot of fun is awaited.

Nice update.

glad somethings are clarified about Ayaan-Humeira.

Enjoyed reading it 😃

Update soon.

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_SmileALot

@_SmileALot

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#688

Did I tell u ever that I m in love with ur story...no I haven't said it until today...

Yep...I have been a silent reader until now...

Wow ...what an update...u have really built up the story quite well...n at one point of time u were thinking of discontinuing this one

Well...u leave an update at such a point...😳

Plz update soon ...

Eagerly waiting for an update...

N ya ...I think it's Rihaan n not Shahid ...the criminal...would love to see AAK being Zoya' saviour n beating hi black n blue...after all he is Jahapana six packs..😉

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potternerd

@potternerd

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#689

Hi lovely update

Sometimes I have a doubt on rihaan...couldn't figure out whether he was on the dark side

But today's update cleared the doubt

Although shahid's character is still a mystery

Hope ayaan n humeira sort things out soon

Finally coming to our favourites asad n zoya...next update should be fun...both alone in a room :D

Please update soon n thanks for the pm

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961111

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#690

res 😉

unres 😃

Hello Aashna...

sorry dear... for being late to unres...

this was another awesome chapter...i am actually liking Ayaan a lot these days...

Sad to read about his broken relationship with Humeira

And Dilshad was as usual so sweet 😳

she is such a darling 🤗

Zoya is always 'eveready' to do something weird and Asad is always there to mend that 😆

Aaahh!! i am simply loving that...😉😆

I loved o see Zoya getting jealous... this jealousy element is the best way to make one realize about his/her love 😳

i could simply imagine Asad glaring at the manager and asking him not to inform anything to the press 🤣

Waiting so eagerly for the next update 😳

Drunk Zoya will be fun to read 😉

the best thing about your story is, though Zoya is a married woman, and is also getting attracted towards Asad unintentionally, there is still no disloyalty from her side...😳

hats off to you for showing it so beautifully 👏

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago