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Posted: 11 years ago

#611

Originally posted by: -StarsLinedUp-
Hey thanks for ur comment...I am glad ur predictions fell into place...n that u enjoyed the update...Dilshaad will definetly have a role to play but not just yet...so keep reading😉

Yeayyy

Am I right

I knew only it's rihaan

Of course it had to be him

How else wud asya come together😆😉😉

I will keep reading ...only if u update soon😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish
Aashna.. A big thank you and hug for the dedication... Thank you so very much.. 🤗

Coming to the update.. So many relevations... Great... You have an art in writing Aashna... Though it is cleared now that Ayaan is out of this...and what he is after ... It left me thinking who this Abdul is .. Yep got to know this guy changes names.. but who is it Rihaan or Shoaib ?? Even after some relevations.. you have kept us hooked to the story...😊😊😊

Loved Dilshaad and Zoya's interaction...Zoya was such a changed woman.. and Asad noticed it all...cool.. and she in her anger let it out that he disturbs her in her dreams... 😊 That whole scene from her was such a lovely and natural one... I just loved it...

So Asad saves her yet again.. and his sixth sense is so active towards Zoya... I wonder when these 2 realize their love for each other...😊 also what would be Asad;s reaction after he knows Zoya and Rihaan's equation.. 😊

Thanks a lot again for the early update.. you are such a sweet girl for taking our request and updating it early... 😊

Hey gal..I guess it was all worth it..all my slaying...as far as u enjoyed the update...

Thanks a lot for complimenting my writing...n m really happy to know that I am able to keep some suspense alive..

Rihaan and Shahid both have their stories..and that shall be revealed slowly...so ya one of them's orignal name is Abdul.

As for Dilshad and Zoya..thats going to be interesting aswell.. they have a future relstionship thats gonna help Zoya a lot...but that will happen later...as of now its all bout getting to a point where Asad and Zoya have a chance to be together..

AS for Asad...and Zoya ...wen its destined..u instinctively get atuned to each other so..I guess it just comes natural..n ya m glad u enjoyed the early update...will give a new one soon..

Thanks a lot for ur wonderful comment..😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: marcoe

Yeayyy

Am I right

I knew only it's rihaan

Of course it had to be him

How else wud asya come together😆😉😉

I will keep reading ...only if u update soon😃

LOL...not really sure...I am still thinking...😉 lets c..😆

Asad and Zoya will come together..worry not...n as for the update...will try for tomm morning..ie..6th May IST around 8am...so stay tuned..😉

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#614

Originally posted by: aarzoo50
amazing update...
omg one of my wild guesses that ayaan was searching about humera hit bulls eye... lol
now who is this Abdul... and wts his current name...
he wants to harm zoya...
ayaan... detective... investigating.. he n asad r collecting proofs against this Abdul...
asad will save zoya. .. nai
everything is damn interesting...
continue soon

Thanks a lot gal...I am glad u thought of Ayaan and Humeira..I mean..the names should have made it easy to associate😆 but then again...Well they have a past..n I will most likely touch upon it in the coming chapter...

As for Abdul..he is either Rihaan or Shahid...or someone totally random??😲😛 JK..either of the 2..I havent change the story yet..

N ya...Asad and Ayaan are trying to collect something against Abdul...n Asad will inevitably save Zoya..

Chalo m glad u find it interesting..so keep reading..more is yet to come..😉

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#615

Originally posted by: rajnid68
This one is truly amazing ..
Ayaan off the loop...

Loving it...thanks for the pm..

Thanks a lot...I am glad u liked it...😊

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#616

Originally posted by: aman93
awsome update ..
now everything is cleared..

Thanks very much..😊

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#617

Originally posted by: -jawaria-
AWESOME UPDATE. Its Rehaan i think. Update next part soon please

Thank u very much...m gald u like it😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: -StarsLinedUp-

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Thanks a lot gal...I am glad u thought of Ayaan and Humeira..I mean..the names should have made it easy to associate😆but then again...Well they have a past..n I will most likely touch upon it in the coming chapter...

As for Abdul..he is either Rihaan or Shahid...or someone totally random??😲😛JK..either of the 2..I havent change the story yet..

N ya...Asad and Ayaan are trying to collect something against Abdul...n Asad will inevitably save Zoya..

Chalo m glad u find it interesting..so keep reading..more is yet to come..😉

aahh. inne saare jawaab miley... dil khush kar ditta...
nxt update kb???

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Posted: 11 years ago

#619

Originally posted by: divram
Woah!!!! 😲 A power packed update... 👏⭐️
Hahahaa nice .. starting had something good.. A Fight between Rihaan and Zoya 😆 well Finally !! Gosh I'm so bad.. can't help it.. I'm an Asya shipper... 😉

'And realising her husband's betrayal was the last straw.' something is not right.. I think she has some inkling to what he is upto.. 😈

and guess who was there to rile her further.. 😆 Asad Ahmed Khan..

Well he atleast can her moods just by looking at her.. 😆

Wow!! Zoya's big argument seemed like a.. a.. a.. I don't have the exact word for it but it made me 😲🤣... a big lol!!

yay!! Dilu's entry.. ..

awww... I totally loved Asad and Dilshad's reunion.. 😊🤗

I tell you Dilshad knows that Zoya is going to be her future bahu.. that's why she gave her love same as she gave Asad... 😆😳

poor thing she felt the hug similar to how her mom used to hug.. 😭

Once again a feeling of dread filled Asad up as he looked at Zoya getting ready to sit in the car.
It didn't make sense to him, but somehow he didn't want her in that car. Seriously Asad!! just sit down and think as to why you and only you get such feelings... 😕😆 but no worries ammi dear is here now.. she'll make sure he realizes it.. 😃😳

You're here..he said shocked as hell I'll still say Rihaan is the culprit.. 😡

So this guy Asad is after is a major con artist.. Wow!! waiting for this mystery to unravel.. 😊

Woah!! 😲another shocker Ayaan in NYPD.. well atleast that explains him being nosey around the office🤔.. even he is after the same guy Asad is.. So he is a good guy.. 👏⭐️

I wish they catch him red handed soon, before tries another attempt to kill Zoya.. 😡

I was looking for something that would tell me about Humeira. so Ayaan is the ex Humeira was upset talking about... 😆 would like to how their story goes.. 😃

Super duper Awesome update... And thanks for updating soon... this is getting more and more interesting.. 😃

oh before I forget .. Update Soon.. 😃😆

N here comes ur spectacularlly detailed comment...I love it..

U liked the fight between Zoya and Rihaan😆 well wat can u do..Zoya can be annoying...n Rihaan poor chap had to lose it 1 day😛

N let me clear this out..Zoya knows nothing about wats going around her...she is just doing her thing..

Asad just became Zoya's punching bag..she just ranted everything to him..n he let her...it just came natural to him...future mein help ho jaayegi..😆

Dilshaad will definetly play a gr8 part in bringing the 2 together..but not just yet..they are on their own for now...

As for Abdul..ya he is a major con artist gone rogue...he started simple enough

As for Asad..he cant allow romantic thoughts about Zoya.,..she is married and he is a gentleman...but time will allow them to pursue these emotions soon...

N ya..Ayaan is the good guy..n he's been snooping around to get some info on Humeira..their story will also happen from the next update onwards...

Other than that...2 more gus left..n soon one of them will be revealed to be the villan...so keep reading..and leaving such awesome comments