FF:Everything Burns II Link to Thread III in Index!!! - Page 45

Originally posted by: indu333

awesome update...

someone is trying to kill zoya,rihaan or shahid????confused...😕

but asad is there to save zoya as always😃

this story is getting interested by each update...

cont soon and thanku for the pm...

Originally posted by: jasminerose

The whole Asad Zoya lingerie thing was funny.😆

Oh this is getting interesting.

Rihan is a big time jerk in all possible ways. There is nothing good about him

Now i get what you were trying to say with establishing the characters.

Enjoyed reading it.😊

Originally posted by: -StarsLinedUp-

Maha this was my update...u didnt like😆..lingerie..akward moments..and silent attraction..that's wat it was...and most importanly it was fate..having a party at Asad and Zoya's cost..

Romance to badhega as we go..so keep reading..btw mystrey bhi thodi badhegi..😉

Thanks for ur mast comment😉 always a pleasure

Originally posted by: AMMY12

awsm part.
Superb one.
And twist in the story that was awsm.
Plz plz cont asap.
Waiting 4 d nxt part.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c

Originally posted by: maha2012

haww nahinnn😲 i loved it😳❤️
u came up with such a unique thing😆 the lingerie part☺️ although it was for rehaan😡 but my asad came

Originally posted by: laks_vish

awesome...Hey I am going on a vacation for a week so cannot be in IF..will comment next week for all the updates

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

OMG !! zoya is hilarious !!
i knew she would pull this sort of trick to seduce her husband !
and hell it backfired !🤣

i loved the whole update ! !!
such a trilling and mystifying update !!
now the knots are finally loosening ! but i still can't make anything of it !!
i'm suspicious of everyone !
do continue soon !!

love
-kiki😳

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

zoya trick backfire...

fabulous update...

very very interesting...

rihaan n ayaan are very suspicious wonder one of them is behind it all...

luv it...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Hey Aashna,

That was just awsome buddy.. .Am not sure if I replied back after reading Ch 7... Sincere apologies if I have not..

Zoya is being so adamant in trying to make her marriage work but alas... they are not destined for each other...😊

OMG.. The first scene was so very embarrassing for Asad and Zoya... Well whatever Zoya is planning to do for her hubby... Mr. Six packs lands up over there... cool...So it is as sign that they are meant to be.. and I would love it when they realize this...😊

Language Mr. Khan... That was again cool... Giving back his diagloue... 😉

He saved her from getting murdered and Ms. Farooqui does not even realize the threat she was into...Rihan seems to be a very dangerous guy ... and he might have pulled in Shahid to help me.. My guess... and I guess Shahid is the guy who was responsible for Najma's suicide or murder...

Story has definitely picked up the pace and got me glued .. to read what happens next...

Thanks a lot Aashna... 😊

Originally posted by: divram

Hey I'm Divya😊 ... Just read all 8 chapters in one shot... Wow awesome story, its totally keeping me glued to the screen⭐️👍🏼... starting with Zoya's dream which was very emotional and beautifully scripted. and Asad's, I totally loved his flashback.. It was just like a happy family time with the brother irritating his sister... but what happened that Najma and her father died.. 'He smiled, feeling his dad's presence, feeling him watching over him from above' It was truly warming..😃

Chapter 1 Zoya seems to be really feisty and arrogant.. !! I just loved Zoya and Humeira's convo.. and Humeira has officially become her *how to seduce your husband* gyan guru for Zoya😆... hahahaa. Wow I totally love the way she walked upto Asad and kissed him😳... Classy!!

Chapter 2 wait a min.. All this while I thought Asad was her hubby😆.. She kissed him thinking it was her husband😉... Hahahaa nice😆.. well should call it 'kissing him' or 'eating him'🤣... How did she end up doing so, kissing a stranger and taking him for her husband? Why was she so brazen , so unguarded with him, in sharing her physicality, her emotionality, her inner most self, letting it all pour out in that kiss. Why didn't it feel wrong?? That's cause he's the one for you.. So her husband's name is Rihan... Asad seems so blown by the kiss😳...

Chapter 3 awkward hug😕?? kuch toh gadbad hai.. Loved Gaffur and Zoya's interaction😊.. she seems pretty detached with Rihaan. Gaffur himself is in thoughts as to why she chose him as his is not perfect for her... Gaffur seems to adore Asad a lot.. So Asya are gonna be business partners eh👍🏼!! great looking forward to their encounters..

Chapter 4 hahhahaaa...😆 She stood in the corner, refraining herself from being a part of the group, that was so blatantly gawking at their new boss. The ooh's and the aah's that followed with everything he had to say, made Zoya almost wanting to rip somebody's head off. Hell he was a charmer and in a matter of 10 minutes he had flipped her company and her staff in his favor. She couldn't stand it, how the demeanor of each and every female, from her youngest intern to her oldest staff member, had changed, and how they were acting like bunch of crazed teenage girls, ogling unashamed at that devil of a man. Someone is jealous... oh and here comes the ever flirtatious Ayaan.. but Ayaan does seem to have some mystery attached to him.. Asad also is not all that fond of Ayaan.. hehee Zoya invading Asad's thoughts.. I totally loved the balcony scene. it was beautifully written.. Can I just say I don't like this Rihaan even a bit..

Chapter 5 So sad Asad misses his father a lot.. 😭poor thing.. Damn she looked stunning, she thought to herself. I own your B**ls tonight Mr Rihaan Mirza.There's no escaping me.😆 I just love her a lot.. 😒 crazy woman, who else can get so impulsive other than our Zoya... Couldn't she atleast grab a coat.. and here comes our hero to save her😃.. totally loved their scene😃😳.. so now Shahid and Ayaan both are a lil mysterious ...

Chapter 6 Well they are trying to put up with each other... Hehehe oh god Asad Zoya being fierce is not helping his imagination😆... And woah!! "Stuck to each other" in the elevator.😳. nice scene.. how much they would have tried to fight the urge building in them.. overall nice update as most of it was Asya... Apart from that there is a lot of mystery lingering about Rihaan, Ayaan and Shahid..

Chapter 7 Rihaan and Zoya were a couple only in the name of legality. Every effort to consummate, to communicate and to create a strong bond was being ceased by unexpected turn of events. Rihaan and Zoya just weren't happening. There was a strong undercurrent of resistance in the relationship and the couple sensed it.😒 Result of being impulsive.. Marriage is not a joke.. but our Zoya realizes after making the mistakes.. Wow nice back story about Zoya's marriage... What is Ayaan after.😕.??Woah Rihaan got angry? that guy does emotions too?? Rihaan seems to be fretting a lil too much... A fleeting image of Zoya passed by as he thought about his wife and just as the thought ceased so did her image. He didn't read too much into it seriously Mr. Emotionally Challenged as ever😒... and the mystery continues...

Chapter 8 heheehee when will Zoya cease creating awkward situations between her and Asad🤣.. No please Mr Khan don't go...I need you... 😆lol this line can be so misconstrued... Wow He had just saved her from being electrocuted😲... aww they are concerned about each other...

What???What did I just hear?? Rihaan walked by only to overhear their conversation Did you say Zoya got electrocuted...OMG is she ok...what happened to her...he almost panicked... This seems so fake.. in the beginning of this chapter It could have been Rihaan hearing the scream and thinking his work is done.. Also in chapter 7 After today, after the close call, he knew it was time to act and clear his way.He could wait to sort the smaller details as things progressed but the most important hurdle had to be removed. seeing this it could be Rihaan.😕.

but then Shahid also panicked.. confusing.😕.. Poor Zoya she is so shaken.. but when Rihaan was consoling her he spoke about lingurie incident which i don't remember Asad mentioning.. how did he know about it..

Wow Finally a look into Asad's back story.. Poor Najma..😭 Asad plight in it was so beautifully written.. my doubts now is that Rihaan 😡could be the one who messed with Najma and Asad is after him.. That could be the reason why Asad thought of using Zoya as a bait Well I hope I have got the story correct so far😃.. This is really good.. and I hope my comment has done some justice to this wonderful work😊... Waiting for the next update😃😳..