QH OS: THE DARKNESS WITHIN - 21/03/2014

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NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: akaswan
This OS is just Amazing 👏

Thank you Mango🤗

I miss you dear🤗

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NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: jasminerose
Hey Navi this was awesome. I am not much of Haider- Humeira fan so i was kinda delaying reading it but you wrote it amazingly. Really. Superb choice of words and a great narration. You are an excellent writer. I actually read this piece outside the context of Qubool hai and still could catch up with the plot coz of your crisp execution. Wonderful.😊

Thank you Jasmine😳

I'm so glad you finally read it...

And you even left me such a lovely comment🤗 Much appreciated dear.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

OS on haider- humeria..??

But i loved it..

Very well written..

Loved their chotu sa romance in rain..

Kuch khaas hai.. In love with this song..

And sorry for commenting so late :(

Edited by ImmortalLove - 11 years ago

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akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: NAVI55
Thank you Mango🤗

I miss you dear🤗

You are welcome Panpan🤗

You know i have read it since last week but i was so lazy to comment

I've wanted to tell you that generally i did not read other couple story i only read Asya story but this is one was very good i really liked it

You should write more OS

And i miss you too it's been a long that i did not see you online

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sara..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Hi navi😊

First of al so sowwie for late reply..have been busy with exams

This is was marvellous..

First I though it was on asya but later I discovered it s on haider and humi...

I honestly like humi n ayaan together..but the way U wrote captivated me..its just amazing

HIS TURMOIL...one step he takes towards humi but when taxis comes he takes two steps away..just loved the morning scene

And my fave was the rain scene..the kiss..then his reaction..then humi s pain..beautifully penned😊

Loved it navi..a lot se bhi zyaada

Thanksss for the pm😊

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Oh my! I just realised that Zanu hasn't read this yet!!

Oh God This amazing piece of brilliance, and she missed it!!

*runs off to go tell her*

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: ImmortalLove
OS on haider- humeria..??

But i loved it..

Very well written..

Loved their chotu sa romance in rain..

Kuch khaas hai.. In love with this song..

And sorry for commenting so late :(

Hey Darling😃

It's ok...for commenting late😃

See, I made up for replying even later😕😆

I think it's more on haider and his inner battle😉

I too love this song...

Thank you for reading although I'm sure you not very interested on Haider🤗

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NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: pinky06
Hi navi😊

First of al so sowwie for late reply..have been busy with exams

This is was marvellous..

First I though it was on asya but later I discovered it s on haider and humi...

I honestly like humi n ayaan together..but the way U wrote captivated me..its just amazing

HIS TURMOIL...one step he takes towards humi but when taxis comes he takes two steps away..just loved the morning scene

And my fave was the rain scene..the kiss..then his reaction..then humi s pain..beautifully penned😊

Loved it navi..a lot se bhi zyaada

Thanksss for the pm😊

Awee...Thank you Pinky😳

For reading and leaving a comment although it was not something on ASYA🤗

I was trying something different...

I too love romance in the rain but if someone dances with me and kisses me in the rain and then leave me there...I will follow him and make his life an even bigger misery😉😆😆

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NAVI55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
Oh my! I just realised that Zanu hasn't read this yet!!

Oh God This amazing piece of brilliance, and she missed it!!

*runs off to go tell her*

Farz!!!!!

Zanu still hasn't read this😕😕