QH OS: THE DARKNESS WITHIN - 21/03/2014

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Nice one.. And here I thought you only wrote heated stories..
You have a dark side as well.. ;-)

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Wow! That was really very beautiful! Very, very nicely done! <3

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Aditi/Swathi

@CHOCOSWATHI

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

awesome os👏

first time i'm reading a story about haider😆

chutki and ammi scene was emotional😭

romance and emotional mixed story😳

it s doom of siddiqui for sure😆

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Hey Navi,

So you finally posted this OS. It was nice, real nice, portraying every bit of Haider's emotions in detail. His past, present, his fear, loss, hope, insecurity. Everything was described beautifully. I realized there wasn't much dialogues but still your descriptions & plot made it flow.

Well done!!

Was this the one you were thinking of starting or was it something related to AsYa? Whatever it was, I really want you to write something on AsYa, pleaseee 😳.

Love..

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
and one for me!

Omg Navi!

This beats any kind of fluff!

Truly!!

I love it so much!

My goodness.

You made me wait so long!!

But it was worth every second of the wait!

Truly!!

I guess it was most definitely an upper hand that I already know it was Haider to begin with. I LOVE HAIDER. I LOVE YOU. AND I SUPER LOVE THIS AMAZING STORY OF YOURS!!

YOU WRITE SO VERY WELL NAVIII!!!!

I mean darkness has never been described so well!

This is done so very well!

Honey drops indeed!!

Poor soul...suffering!

I could totally feel the angst and pain Navi! I totally did in fact!

You describe very well. No need for dialogues. This is narrative at its best!!

But the Chutki and Ammi bit...so touching!!! I want to cry with him!

*To think that I was offering some nonsensical dialogues*

He he.

Superawesome!!!!

Love it!!!!!

Handsome Hunk Haider!

HHH mwah! Farz loves you loads!!

And Navi!! Mwahhh

Zanu come!!!

MWAHHH

OMG...What a long comment Farz😃

You really like Haider dear😃

I'm glad you liked it...One more OS still to come on Haider...it might be a while though...that's a spinoff from my wedding TS...Remember that one...

And by the way madam...your dialogues are not nonsensical...I am going to use it😉😃

I am glad you liked this one dear😳

And yes Zanu...Please come...I am waiting😆

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Shubh007
Nice os...😊

Beautifully written...👏

Thank u😳

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Zanutix
Waiting!

*exaggeratedly impatiently taps fingers*

Updated...

and now I am waiting

For u...

Where are u Doc😃

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: gowtu
It was very nc... May i ask u another one... ? Thnks for the pm...

Thank u😳

U want another one😲 on Haider or Asya...

U welcome dear...Thank u for reading and commenting😳

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: A.Kh_20
Res
unres

sorry for late comment!!

Thank u Apu😳

Don't be sorry...I understand you are busy with work...

Mwah😃

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: niyati789
Unres on pg1

Appi it was romantic and emotional too😭

Haider misses chutki 😭

Whos doom will it be ?

I want it to be Siddiqui''s doom 😛

P.s update bohut jaldi diya 😆

My sweet Chikoo🤗

Thank u😳

I am happy that you liked it...Yes we all want it to be Siddiques doom😆

😆😆😆

I blame the fruits for being late...I wanted to write and post it early but u all distracted me with the chatting late night...

🤗