QH OS: THE DARKNESS WITHIN - 21/03/2014 - Page 5

Originally posted by: CHOCOSWATHI

awesome os👏

first time i'm reading a story about haider😆

chutki and ammi scene was emotional😭

romance and emotional mixed story😳

it s doom of siddiqui for sure😆

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Navi,

So you finally posted this OS. It was nice, real nice, portraying every bit of Haider's emotions in detail. His past, present, his fear, loss, hope, insecurity. Everything was described beautifully. I realized there wasn't much dialogues but still your descriptions & plot made it flow.

Well done!!

Was this the one you were thinking of starting or was it something related to AsYa? Whatever it was, I really want you to write something on AsYa, pleaseee 😳.

Love..

Originally posted by: KReyAS

nice os

Originally posted by: -Aditi.

Nice

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Maybe another one?

Hehe.

Thank you again my dearest Navi!

You rock!

Love you!

You dedicated this amazing piece of work to me?

And call me sugar.

I mean!!!!!

You gave me a classic Haider!

I love him so much!

And you gave me the exact him!

I cannot thank you enough!!

Every last bit is amazing!

From the BANG BANG BANG!

I mean that's his heartbeat??

That was mine!!!

You had my heart thumping while I read the OS!

That's how immersed I got to your wonderfully written craft!

I'm overwhelmed! So muchh so that I feel myself wanting to keep reading it!

Love you honeyyy dropsss Navi!!!

You awesome!

Write more!!!!

Mwah!!!

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

I have unreserved another comment from PAGE 1 *totally gloating here*

You have captured the darkness extremely well!

So well that all I want to do is take some of that darkness away.

I love you Navi!

Originally posted by: kals82

hai sweety,

my honest comment...

i dont like read.. about any other couple other asya... in qubool hai...

since u wrote it.. and i did read...

u bring out the turmoil in haider very nicely...

and ofcourse ur description is good...