New OS: Perfection (Author's Note on Page 7; Please do read)

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

read the note and I was stunned

But that proves that such guys do exist

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rockstar_16

@rockstar_16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

😉 loved it

awesome os

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Sabrina

@SabrinaMalik

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

This was Perfection, no doubt.

You brought out every emotion and every scenario so beautifully and perfectly.

I've seen the fountain show and I completely agree, it is Beautiful.

Thanks for the PM.

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Zanutix

@Zanutix

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Well, this OS was Perfection.

Every little emotion was brought out beautifully. 👏

Aw, your Asad, is such a darling! You're really lucky!

I could totally imagine the Dubai fountain.. and the dancing..

WOW! Is all I can say.

Beautiful OS. 😊

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Darling Raz,

As promised I did read it. Sorry I took my own sweet time.

This was perfection. Definitely!

Knowing this is your personal experience I imagined you. Every bit of it and you warmed my heart with your descriptive writing.

I can just say the OS was beautiful because I could see it was you.

I don't have to tell you what an amazing writer you are cos you already know that but I do want to say you left me happy.

I am truly happy for you and may you have the love that makes you smile always in your life, by your side keeping you content.

Love Always.

Juliet!

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SH7_Sunny

@SH7_Sunny

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Comment update on pg 1
sorry i readed ur OS very late
i was busy with my uni

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rads73937

@rads73937

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Awesome OS.

Loved it.

Thanx for the pm. Take care.

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Amna

@...KSGmiAmor...

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

This OS is PERFECTION

i am completely speechless

lost in a beautiful trance

Amazing writing !!!!

Wonderful !!!

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Its an amazing work dear

Pls pm me when u update any stories

😛

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Anu

@sweety003

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

PERFECT 👍🏼

loved it ❤️

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