New OS: Perfection (Author's Note on Page 7; Please do read)

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-DarkSlayer-

@-DarkSlayer-

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Posted: 11 years ago

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SH7_Sunny

@SH7_Sunny

Elite

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Posted: 11 years ago

ressy messy is here to res his place in first position😆
it was awesome os Raz. I loved it very much.
Ur that Dubai experience u said here was very good n i was drowned in that experience while reading it.
Fabulous piece of of writing Raz.
U shld continue this OS Raz.
Thanks for writing a beautiful OS n for the pm

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful OS Raz. Thanks for the pm n I imagined ASYA/KABHI while i read this as they were the reason I joined this forum rather this is the first time i joined any forum.. 😃

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BlackNWhite

@desidillse

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you so much for the pm Raz. I imagined Asya/ KaBhi in the OS. It was superb. I would love to read it again

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benaz

@benaz

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

Heya! Thank you for the PM. It was a great OS. Really beautifully depicted all the love and appreciation😊

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-StarsLinedUp-

@-StarsLinedUp-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hun it was splendid,mesmerising and simply beautiful. Everything from the first line till the last line was "Perfection"

The way you wrote had so much romantic stillness to it...It had its easy pace, with the air of love. Amazing,amazing,amazing.

Gal you took me back to Dubai. Cos I was there just a month ago, right in front of those very fountains, cuddled up in my hubb's arms as we both watched the dance of lights, water and music...and it was truly Pure Bliss...So I can somehow feel the emotions u have expressed here...It was truly a secluded moment, in so much crowd...

Wonderful piece of work. It was poetry, marrrying Prose!!😃

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Live-life

@Live-life

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Omg Ra.one! That was a perfected OS with more perfection!

Man...too much perfection in one day...I don't think I'll be able to sleep!

It started out beautifully...with the little cute moments between the gal and the guy...Gosh co cute!

I was awwwing all the way through! And especially the way the gy kissed her forehead goodness! So cute! And then the sareee scene Omg!!! ☺️☺️

I blushed on that one for some reason...it was intense yet really cute and romantic...it had that little playfulness to it...I enjoyed that scene so much! 😃 Heheh the way the guy was concerned...man! I was making these really cute faces while reading it 😆

And then the fountain scene...man I would love to go to Dubai someday and see that fountain in the banner...Ufff! It sounds so enticing especially with the music the arabic music...Goodness..it's like moussse with a extra chocolateee! om nom nom! Caloriesss! 😛😆

To be honest...instead of iMAGINIG Asya or Ariya...I actually imagines you and "Arjun" on this one...I don't know why but...I did! Don't judge me...😆It was just kinda obvious to me I guess! hehe!

But seriously!

This was a perfect OS...god! nOW i wanna Go to Dubaaiii!

I live so close but can't gooo oh well someday I shall! 😉 Let's not lose hope!

I love the picture btw...it's a perfect view !

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Fantabulous job Ra.oneee! oh and thanks for the pm!!! Kepp writing like this mon cherieee!

😊

Love you!

🤗

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

And that piece was, quite literally, perfection! <3

Beautifully, beautifully done! 👏 I definitely needed something to make me smile, and you succeeded. 😃 I like how you never mentioned their names. It really could be anyone you were talking about and I like that sense of art and mystery.

I really enjoyed this! 😃 Super-sweet and romantic. <3 You never fail to make me happy! ❤️

-Fari. 😳 ❤️

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

One word for this wonderful OS...

Perfection

After a long time, I visited the forum and I guess luck was on my side to come across this OS. I have read your stories before. You are a very talented writer and manage to hit the right emotion and feeling.

Truly, a very nice romantic and well written OS.

👏