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Posted: 11 years ago
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just perfect⭐️
keep writting😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
It was truly perfection👏
Loved it...🤗
By ur words,I can understand how happy n excited u might have felt during ur trip...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
awesome update..

wow!! surely that was perfection..

your words and descriptions are so beautiful..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Beautiful!!!!
Awesome!!!
Lovely!!!!
It was superb!!!!
Loved it!!!
Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Thank you!

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Beautiful OS Raz. Thanks for the pm n I imagined ASYA/KABHI while i read this as they were the reason I joined this forum rather this is the first time i joined any forum.. 😃


Glad you liked it. I can imagine AsYa/KaBhi as well. I gathered that much from your username. Lol.

Originally posted by: -Aditi.

Thank you so much for the pm Raz. I imagined Asya/ KaBhi in the OS. It was superb. I would love to read it again


I'm with you on that. I can imagine AsYa as well on this. Aww, that's so sweet.

Originally posted by: benaz

Heya! Thank you for the PM. It was a great OS. Really beautifully depicted all the love and appreciation😊


Thank you!

Originally posted by: starslinedup

Hun it was splendid,mesmerising and simply beautiful. Everything from the first line till the last line was "Perfection"

The way you wrote had so much romantic stillness to it...It had its easy pace, with the air of love. Amazing,amazing,amazing.
Gal you took me back to Dubai. Cos I was there just a month ago, right in front of those very fountains, cuddled up in my hubb's arms as we both watched the dance of lights, water and music...and it was truly Pure Bliss...So I can somehow feel the emotions u have expressed here...It was truly a secluded moment, in so much crowd...
Wonderful piece of work. It was poetry, marrrying Prose!!😃


Aww, thanks sweetheart! I truly did write from my heart. As I said, this is really close to my heart because its really just a snippet from my life and what I felt.
I can totally understand as I was in the same situation with the exception that it wasn't my husband rather my boyfriend.
That is the most sweetest comment I've received. Thanks so much!

Originally posted by: Live-life

Omg Ra.one! That was a perfected OS with more perfection!

Man...too much perfection in one day...I don't think I'll be able to sleep!
It started out beautifully...with the little cute moments between the gal and the guy...Gosh co cute!
I was awwwing all the way through! And especially the way the gy kissed her forehead goodness! So cute! And then the sareee scene Omg!!! ☺️☺️
I blushed on that one for some reason...it was intense yet really cute and romantic...it had that little playfulness to it...I enjoyed that scene so much! 😃 Heheh the way the guy was concerned...man! I was making these really cute faces while reading it 😆
And then the fountain scene...man I would love to go to Dubai someday and see that fountain in the banner...Ufff! It sounds so enticing especially with the music the arabic music...Goodness..it's like moussse with a extra chocolateee! om nom nom! Caloriesss! 😛😆
To be honest...instead of iMAGINIG Asya or Ariya...I actually imagines you and "Arjun" on this one...I don't know why but...I did! Don't judge me...😆It was just kinda obvious to me I guess! hehe!
But seriously!
This was a perfect OS...god! nOW i wanna Go to Dubaaiii!
I live so close but can't gooo oh well someday I shall! 😉 Let's not lose hope!
I love the picture btw...it's a perfect view !
😳
Fantabulous job Ra.oneee! oh and thanks for the pm!!! Kepp writing like this mon cherieee!
😊
Love you!
🤗


Bang on with "Arjun" and me. I told you that it would be something special. Now you know why I want to go back to Dubai. Nope, never lose hope.
Merci beucoup!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-

And that piece was, quite literally, perfection! <3

Beautifully, beautifully done! 👏 I definitely needed something to make me smile, and you succeeded. 😃 I like how you never mentioned their names. It really could be anyone you were talking about and I like that sense of art and mystery.
I really enjoyed this! 😃 Super-sweet and romantic. <3 You never fail to make me happy! ❤️
-Fari. 😳 ❤️


Aww, thanks so much Fari! I promise the entire time I was reading your comment I kept on going "Aww" and that's it.
I never mentioned the names as it is my memory with the man who swept me off my feet. It is naught but the truth written just as I remembered it.
Once again, awww. Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: metoyou

One word for this wonderful OS...


Perfection


After a long time, I visited the forum and I guess luck was on my side to come across this OS. I have read your stories before. You are a very talented writer and manage to hit the right emotion and feeling.
Truly, a very nice romantic and well written OS.

👏


Thank you! Thank you so much! I can understand. Lots of people have disappeared. Glad I did but I confess I wrote nothing but the truth.

Originally posted by: p_s05

Beautiful!

Lovely descriptive writing! 👏


Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: -RM-

Beautiful.
Loved It :)
Perfection it was!


Aw, thanks!

Originally posted by: noesha

Loved it as usual.

maybe a bit more than usual ;) it was awesome.
Thanks for t pm!


Thank you. Well I'm really glad that you did.

Originally posted by: unishaz

awesome dear.. Beautifully written.. Thanks for pm..


Thank you!


Thank you!

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Amazing os...👏

Just love it...😊


Thank you so much!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

That was Beautifully Written.. Good Title - Perfection...😊.. Enjoyed reading it.. Thanks for sharing..😊


Thank you love!

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Very nice
thanx for pm


Thank you so much and your welcome.



Thanks!

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Beautiful Raaz Awesome

U depicted it so well
sweet & romantic
Thanks for the Pm
Loved it to the core 😊


Thanks Goldie! Glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: Riya.S.007

Am I alive reading it?

Its so beautiful. Imagined Asya of course.

Omg that saree wearing scene and pinch on waist *blush* *thud* and then the fountain wow so beautiful.

You are the perfection dear !!!!

Loved it. And hey are you very busy with life?? Please update Silk ribbons na.

PS your profile pic and in sig box vampire queen's siggie


You should be otherwise I would send the FBI over to investigate who left the comment. 😆
Of course. Many did. Except Nabee, she imagined "Arjun" and me. Bang on!
Lol, it sound nice in writing but I swear the experience was mortifying. Hahaha.
Thank you my dear and you are the better of the perfection.
Busy, quite. But have just finished replying so will update by end of the week.
Oh my gosh, I love her creations. Her's and Mouminon's.

Originally posted by: kals82

hai raz,

this is perfect... i know it is random...

what is the status of their relationship here..

and thank u for dropping a line in my OS... colorful holi...
felt really good.


Heyy! Thanks so much! It's not really random, it's a moment from my life put into writing as I experienced it. Like I said, it is a freestyler. You can imagine anything past whatever is written.
That was truly a wonderful OS my dear! That was amazing!

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

wow razz dear..

it was awesome and mind blowing os.
just loved it.
thanks for the pm.


Thanks!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Ta33iiE

When my sister came back from Dubai, she showed us a video she took of the fountain dance - it was beautiful.

Since it was freestyle I chose to imagine Arshi and Asya as the couple :D


It truly is. Oh ArShi huh? That's a good choice. But now that you say it, I can imagine them too.

Originally posted by: aadi720

wow superb update...

absolutely mesmerizing...
it was absolutey perfect...
scenes was really cute and I wanted to be there on girl's place(I know now I an asking to much)
thanks for the pm...


Thank you so much!
You're not asking too much at all. This is a moment from my life so if I can be the girl then anyone can take my place.


Thanks!

Originally posted by: Linsie

❤️ ❤️ ❤️


Thank you!

Originally posted by: love.asad.zoya

Romantic OS !!!! ❤️
Lovely work 👏
One word that define ur work "Perfection" 😉


Aww, thanks!

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

Amazing os

Very nicely written dear


Thank you!

Originally posted by: Azraa01

Thank you for the pm Raz.

It was a superb piece of writing..
In short it truly defined "Perfection"


Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: ShanayaShaleen

Awsummm Raz! Loved It...Beautiful!!!! I first imagined AsYa nd den Me nd Shaleen! Hayeee..What blisss!!! ❤️😳 Thanxx fr pm lovey!


Hahaha, tumhara kuchh nahi ho sakta! But really happy you liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jazsidhu

hey tis is fabulous...

amazing...
luv it...
beautifully written...
totally imagine AsYa...
thx fr the pm...


Thanks Jaz! Glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: Divi.C

nice os... N musical fountains r really so beautiful...i just loved them so much...


Thanks Divi dear!


Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: gowtu

Awesome... Loved it..


Thanks!

Originally posted by: zola007

Awesome Os !

Loved it
Thanks for the pm (:


Glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: hurya112

just perfect⭐️

keep writting😊


Thanks!


Thanks so much!

Originally posted by: manognasai

It was truly perfection👏
Loved it...🤗
By ur words,I can understand how happy n excited u might have felt during ur trip...😃


Thanks! Oh I was beyond happy and excited. Lol. Thanks again!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Applef

awesome update..


wow!! surely that was perfection..

your words and descriptions are so beautiful..


Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Beautiful!!!!
Awesome!!!
Lovely!!!!
It was superb!!!!
Loved it!!!
Thanks 4 pm


Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!


Thanks so much!

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