KSG4ever FF: Asya - Written in the Skies#04 (Part 41 /Page 115)(26/4) - Page 54

Originally posted by: ...KSGmiAmor...

Why please tell me why, please " hysterical" ll me why " HYSTERICAL" why you don't want to let him leave forever 🤢

PS: i not myself tonight so ... 😆😆

Originally posted by: Linsie

Originally posted by: anopama

wow what an update
knew zoya words would have eat at asad's
because she knew where to hit him
oh she is still under his skin no matter what and same for her
but they both have this contempt for each other bcuz of what the think happened
her father was nervous bcuz he thought asad might have said something to incriminate him
zoya descussion with her father at home and office wow
knew that he was never gonna give her the presidency she was just fooling herself
she is gonna resign but she changed her mind she should have resigned on the spot
and let akram run it into the ground
oh what gaffur said to her was harsh but it was the truth siddiqui's is her life her life revovles around it
update soon need some asad action

Originally posted by: ...KSGmiAmor...

I Like U 😊

Originally posted by: pyaari_puja

I have been silently reading your FF for a while now and I must say, I absolutely love it. It is one of the ones I wait for to be updated. I love its pace because its not too fast or slow. Your sense of business seems to be great because it all flows and makes sense to the reader. My heart goes out to poor Zoya. She has almost everything but at the same time, nothing. While he remarks to Asad were quite cutting and uncalled for, coming from what she 'knows' thanks to her father, I feel it is logical for her to be spiteful towards Asad because at the end of 6 days she realized she loved him. And as an 18 year old pregnant girl who feels shes in love and then loses the baby, cant have kids anymore and is so rudely given a divorce, its only realistic she'd be upset. I am not sure, but I think Asad didnt realize that yet? He knows she made him feel really different and brought out really intense feelings and passion but I don't think he has acknowledged to himself that he ever loved her. I also understand his point of view. I actually wanted to clarify, does Asad think Zoya aborted the baby or does he know that it was a miscarriage? I do to some extent sympathize with him too but the way hes been playing around with girls and what not after it really upsets me though it makes complete sense for his character to do so in terms of his personality. Don't like Tanveer though

But even now I feel the men in Zoya's life are toying around with her. Her father punishing her for mostly being a girl, back 11 years ago and now too. And now is Asad going after her as well for the Southville Zoning project fiasco her father causes, though he was going to mess up her Houston project as welll if I remember correctly. As for Ayaan, I am not sure how I feel about him. He is very practical and a little dry for my taste, and I feel even Zoya feels that way after that scene about routine with him. I am not sure why she is marrying him. is she in love with him or does she feel she is or is she just doing it for the sake of doing it? I find him to be helpful and a good friend, but marryable, not so much. Also I can't get over the fact that she'll never have a kid :( makes me so sad for her

I really hope Asad is the one that figures out what Siddiqui by finding his & her letters and then exposes Ghafoor to Zoya. At least that way it would redeem one of the men in her life as opposed to her finding out and trying to prove her innocence to Asad who already thinks she will only go to him when she needs something. I can see him very easily dismissing her claims as a way to gain sympathy to get what she wants.

But all in all I really love your style of writing and the plot of your story!

Originally posted by: pinky06

Haaaw mujhe tho koi pyaar hi nahi karta😭😆