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Posted: 11 years ago

#521

OMG!! it was surprising to me what gaffur think about her daughter i really though that zoya will discover truth of letters and gaffur will ask forgiveness from her but he is full on protesting againist zoya even coming from hospital he is full on to fight to her daughter that for meanlessly...i think gaffur has gone mad...according to me gaffur and asad both stand on same place...againist zoya...both are mean taking revenge to zoya for nothing she has done or say not responsable...in age of 18 i don't know how other thinks that zoya should have gone to patch with asad as she was depressed,loose her baby and she was not independed too and very soon asad was famous for bedmate...i think zoya was not wrong she love her father that is obess according to me she have father only in her life as family and ayaan is just as a support for her thou she is ready to marry him but her bad luck that first mother then husband and now father...all are mean and selfish according to me for zoya...they never give importances to her...asad was thinking that after get good fainance position,status and dating and sleeping with so many women zoya will get impress...for what for sleeping with him after knowing they were divorced...he never said that he loves zoya after so many year and they never talk about thier baby too...continue soon...thanks for pm...😊

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Amna

@...KSGmiAmor...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#522

Originally posted by: akaswan

Arrggghhh okay you better do them see the true soon Awesome 😡 or else ... 🤣

Let me think about that 😡😆

LOL i don't want to see them siffer again 😭

And please who is in love with Gaffur here 🤢

He can just get lost somewhere and let my babies together😆

So she will not opens her eyes any time soon 😆

Dont worry ... Ghafoor will be leaving for his vacations soon😉

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akaswan

@akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#523

Only on vacation ... 😡😆

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Amna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#524

Originally posted by: ankitabaran
OMG!! it was surprising to me what gaffur think about her daughter i really though that zoya will discover truth of letters and gaffur will ask forgiveness from her but he is full on protesting againist zoya even coming from hospital he is full on to fight to her daughter that for meanlessly...i think gaffur has gone mad...according to me gaffur and asad both stand on same place...againist zoya...both are mean taking revenge to zoya for nothing she has done or say not responsable...in age of 18 i don't know how other thinks that zoya should have gone to patch with asad as she was depressed,loose her baby and she was not independed too and very soon asad was famous for bedmate...i think zoya was not wrong she love her father that is obess according to me she have father only in her life as family and ayaan is just as a support for her thou she is ready to marry him but her bad luck that first mother then husband and now father...all are mean and selfish according to me for zoya...they never give importances to her...asad was thinking that after get good fainance position,status and dating and sleeping with so many women zoya will get impress...for what for sleeping with him after knowing they were divorced...he never said that he loves zoya after so many year and they never talk about thier baby too...continue soon...thanks for pm...😊

Ok first of All i want to say ... U r absolutely Amazing ... For giving me such a long elaborative wonderful feedback🤗

U are actually one of the few who get Zoya's situation

She is a victim in the War Asad vs. Ghafoor

Asad will soon understand when the trruth comes out and as for ghafoor ... He has a very thick skull

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Amna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#525

Originally posted by: akaswan
Only on vacation ... 😡😆

Haeyyy *me drooling over his PERFECT face Perfect Biceps PERFECT triceps* ☺️

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akaswan

@akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#526

Originally posted by: ...KSGmiAmor...

Haeyyy *me drooling over his PERFECT face Perfect Biceps PERFECT triceps* ☺️
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Stop drolling and replied to my question 😡🤣

PS: He is just ... i did not have word 😳

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Amna

@...KSGmiAmor...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#527

Originally posted by: akaswan

What Question ????

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akaswan

@akaswan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#528

Originally posted by: ...KSGmiAmor...

LOL you should really storp drooling 😆

You said that Siddiqui is going on vacation soon and ask you if it's only on vacation or definitely 😈😆

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Amna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#529

Originally posted by: akaswan

Vacation only
He will come back 😈

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Puja

@HayeSiyaapa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#530

I have been silently reading your FF for a while now and I must say, I absolutely love it. It is one of the ones I wait for to be updated. I love its pace because its not too fast or slow. Your sense of business seems to be great because it all flows and makes sense to the reader. My heart goes out to poor Zoya. She has almost everything but at the same time, nothing. While he remarks to Asad were quite cutting and uncalled for, coming from what she 'knows' thanks to her father, I feel it is logical for her to be spiteful towards Asad because at the end of 6 days she realized she loved him. And as an 18 year old pregnant girl who feels shes in love and then loses the baby, cant have kids anymore and is so rudely given a divorce, its only realistic she'd be upset. I am not sure, but I think Asad didnt realize that yet? He knows she made him feel really different and brought out really intense feelings and passion but I don't think he has acknowledged to himself that he ever loved her. I also understand his point of view. I actually wanted to clarify, does Asad think Zoya aborted the baby or does he know that it was a miscarriage? I do to some extent sympathize with him too but the way hes been playing around with girls and what not after it really upsets me though it makes complete sense for his character to do so in terms of his personality. Don't like Tanveer though

But even now I feel the men in Zoya's life are toying around with her. Her father punishing her for mostly being a girl, back 11 years ago and now too. And now is Asad going after her as well for the Southville Zoning project fiasco her father causes, though he was going to mess up her Houston project as welll if I remember correctly. As for Ayaan, I am not sure how I feel about him. He is very practical and a little dry for my taste, and I feel even Zoya feels that way after that scene about routine with him. I am not sure why she is marrying him. is she in love with him or does she feel she is or is she just doing it for the sake of doing it? I find him to be helpful and a good friend, but marryable, not so much. Also I can't get over the fact that she'll never have a kid :( makes me so sad for her

I really hope Asad is the one that figures out what Siddiqui by finding his & her letters and then exposes Ghafoor to Zoya. At least that way it would redeem one of the men in her life as opposed to her finding out and trying to prove her innocence to Asad who already thinks she will only go to him when she needs something. I can see him very easily dismissing her claims as a way to gain sympathy to get what she wants.

But all in all I really love your style of writing and the plot of your story!