1#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala: AsYa FF (Ch1-5|#2Link pg1)

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#701

Originally posted by: jasminerose
Hey read the last two updates in a go. Beautifully written. Really like the way how things are progressing. The outburst was much needed. The shopping sequence was lovely.😊

Oh my gosh thank you so very much. 😳 am glad it didnt disappoint you. Thanks for reading. 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#702

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA
Awesome update. Loved it. But get confused with past and present. Thanks for pm.
Update soon

Points to remember - NO BLUE no present. NO BLACK no Past. Only BLACK only PAST. Only BLUE only PRESENT. ⭐️

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#703

Originally posted by: sweetluck
awesome update...👏
loved it..❤️

asad n symbolism wid sun was superb..👏

i guess zoya is accepting this relation unknowingly..😳..asad's anger was justified so does zoya's guilt..but how long dey gonna play anger-anger..😕😆

waiting for wednesday..😳😆
thanx for pm..😃

Thank you, lets see kitni deir tak they are gona play. 😉 after all Thak ke sapno ki duniya mein dono ko toh jana hi hai, woh bhi ek saath 😳 😆

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#704

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--
Ek aur update dena jaldi Anku 😳 He is waiting for u look how he is dancing for u 🤣🤣

MAINE KAHA NA ONLY SALMAN OR KSG 😡 😆

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#705

Originally posted by: PreetiASYArocks
You are an awesome writer yaar. It gave me all the feels. I could totally imagine Karan and Surbhi in all the scenes..especially Karan.
Loved the last part and eagerly waiting for the next update! :D

Thaank you soo much deary made my day wala comment. THANK YOU. Yes my Asad is KSG and Zoya is Surbhi and if my updates gives you their feels, especially Karan's, THANK YOU so very much 😭 😳

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#706

Originally posted by: swapno

Haww...you know that.Yes my left arm is under sling for one month..well story is as usual hit by a car, went to hospital. Then slipped on the hospital floor and there I am...puff😆
Now I am on leave..trying to catch up all the stories which I missed and writing comment about it. I am a lefty so it is little bit difficult...but I am managing well. One month actually long time...
Anyways...about your writing it gives a fresh feeling. keep writing, Zoya got a superstar in her life and she is realizing it very well...😳
Now a days I am craving for Asad-Zoya's romantic stories. You know why...😉
OH god I need to stop. Otherwise I will start to cry and all days will pass like this...Sigh...

I came to know from your thread i was going to pm you infact asking for an update but then i came to know that your arm is broken and you toh updated today 😆

WHY? WHY CANT YOU TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF 😡

It will be soon healed, one month dekhte dekhte kat jayega just see, 😳

Thanks yaar, you know this ss has kept my AsYa alive in me. Am glad it give you AsYa feels. 😳

Take care sweets 😳

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 11 years ago

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#707

Originally posted by: sweety003
allah miya whats wrong with asad now😕 zoya being so sweet to him

staircase scene so romantic...😳

asad and sun symbolism...very well written absolutely loved it

zoya feeling so guilty..poor baby..confess your love to him kush hojayega asad

thanks for pm ...update sooonish

sorry for late comment

nothing is wrong, he expected too much from Zoya and thought she was caring really for him, but then when Zoya said all these formalities are not needed he got mad thinking she was having pity on him 😆 thank you so much 😳