Honestly, I had forgotten all about reading it but remembered just in time. I finished reading just two minutes before 12 or else I'd have been late.😆😆
Okay now about the story, what can I say, it is very good. I didn't know that you had such great writing skills.
That Akram😡 mann karta hai ki real life mein ussko jaakar ek punch maroo!! Aur uss Billo Rani ka toh mein galla hi dabaa doon.😡😡
Kya baat hai, it was nice to see Ayaan calling Zoya Mona Darling, it reminded me of the old days. 😆
Back when Mona & Robert were making a plan together to prevent Asad from reaching the court.😳
Asad aur Zoya ki chemistry toh bass too good hai Senorita.😛 I just love how Asad is so overprotective of Zoya in this story. Aur Zoya bhi kutch kam nahi hai..voh toh full on Tanveer se gussa thi..aur hoti bhi kyun nahi..Tanu ne usske Six-Pack ko choone ki himakat ki!😡
Overall dono ke dono, superb characters. I love them. <3
Aww..show ki jeise iss story mein bhi un dono ki twin angels ho gayi. Aww how cute that moment was..😳 when Asad was holding Sehr and Zoya was holding our Sanam.😳😳😳
Kam se kam in your story, we got the moments of the girls as babies, in the serial they just showed a leap without showing us how happy Asad and Zoya must've been.
So..your story was just really fantabulous..mein isse judge karne waali kaun hoti hoon?😳 Mein toh bas yeh keh sakti hoon ki I totally loved it. I had a fun time reading it. At first I was like how am I going to read all the parts at once.😲 But now I have no regrets. In fact I want to read more and more.😆😆
Love you Senorita,
Pookhi 🤗
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