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Posted: 11 years ago


Thanks! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
I felt so sad reading it.
I still don't know what to make of it. Is there a forever happily ever after or is it life is too short live for the moment.

It was written with perfection and message was very thought provoking.
I got to read your other works too...soon.

Fabulous dear. Write more please.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

I felt so sad reading it.
I still don't know what to make of it. Is there a forever happily ever after or is it life is too short live for the moment.

It was written with perfection and message was very thought provoking.
I got to read your other works too...soon.

Fabulous dear. Write more please.



Oh my God.
Is this a dream?
Did I just read Perfectionst2's feedback?
Wow.

That depends on your outlook. :)
There can be a happily ever after if you are ready to go against all of life's odds and embrace what you have chosen for yourself.
But there isn't a hard and fast rule!
What if these little moments of now, little moments of happiness turn into a lifetime within a blink of an eye?
The choice is yours!

You wanna read my works? I can give you the links if you want!
*yep, not so modest*

Haha, I wish to write something before March ends. :)

Thank you so much for reading and liking this Perfectionist2, means a lot.

Edited by Zanutix - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Zanutix



Oh my God.
Is this a dream?
Did I just read Perfectionst2's feedback?
Wow.

That depends on your outlook. :)
There can be a happily ever after if you are ready to go against all of life's odds and embrace what you have chosen for yourself.
But there isn't a hard and fast rule!
What if these little moments of now, little moments of happiness turn into a lifetime within a blink of an eye?
The choice is yours!

You wanna read my works? I can give you the links if you want!
*yep, not so modest*

Haha, I wish to write something before March ends. :)

Thank you so much for reading and liking this Perfectionist2, means a lot.

What again😲 Why is it a dream? I am pretty much no one on this forum.
Some would even term me as a hormonal dysfunction, estrogen gone crazy, lazy luster of a make belief character named Asad - don't ask me. But if you ask any of my readers they will tell you exactly why.
It was a compliment, not a feedback really.
I found it sad cos I connected with the story, I could see the play of scenes as I read it. Especially the Mall each day, a little shy twitch of Asad's lips. the white lily, the kiss. It was picture perfect.
The initial one fourth was a blur, I didn't know what was happening with the mysterious element to it. I initially guessed they were estranged lovers, or friends who had a fall out or some acquaintance. But then the truth hit me harder.
Such relationships come with lots of sacrifice and mammoth of understanding, practically it is difficult for both people but not impossible. And ultimately yes the heart seeks where it's happiness lies most.
I LOVED IT! VERY HEART WARMING!
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMGGG...i didn't know you write !! i am sorry i didn't come and comment before..this was in my PM account and i only go on that to send Pms so i just found this...
I bookmarked...comment will be coming soon

Reya <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dawg.




This is amazing.



You are truly gifted! Such amazing story and that more amazing story telling skill!

You're gifted!


Cannot wait to read more from you!

Can you please PM me if you write something?

Thanks.




*he he*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Dawg.




This is amazing.



You are truly gifted! Such amazing story and that more amazing story telling skill!

You're gifted!


Cannot wait to read more from you!

Can you please PM me if you write something?

Thanks.




*he he*


Oh, really? Thank you so much! 😃
It means a lot that you read and liked the story!
Yes, I'll surely PM you if I write anything else.
Once again, thanks!

*HA HA*
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Originally posted by: roshni_A

this is awesome..loved it..


Thank you so much! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow. You would? Thanks!


Uh, so...


You writing anything ATM?



Should we be expecting sth from you anytime soon?


No? Not do soon?


Oh, okay.

Was just wondering.



I mean, you write so very well.


It feels like you're born for this.



So...yeah.



That's all.



Hope to hear from you soon.




Very , very soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow. You would? Thanks!


Uh, so...


You writing anything ATM?



Should we be expecting sth from you anytime soon?


No? Not so soon?


Oh, okay.

Was just wondering.



I mean, you write so very well.


It feels like you're born for this.



So...yeah.



That's all.



Hope to hear from you soon.




Very , very soon.

Oh. Please don't forget...PM me if there's anything new from your side.

Kay.

That's all from me.

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