AsYa FF/Thread IV/ The Butterflies! - Page 8

Originally posted by: kals82

hi,

yeah i do take my job seriously...🤣🤣

i noted one more thing too.. but i thought... she updated.. under lot pressure... from us...

the other blooper was zoya breakfast..

they haven't meet each other..isnt.. then how did asad knows about sharing the sandwich and also the juice.. i think maria is there with the couple i guess... and she answered the Doc.. ..which i assumed...

the perfectionist.. became perfectionist 2...under the pressure of love from her readers...

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Hey Good Job!😛 Impressive😃

But that was Maria's dialougue that we share a sandwich.

I will have to read the update again. Seems like I messed up a few times.😳

See I don't do well when I rush.🤗

But thanks for pointing out Kalyani.

About Shireen 😆 I am going to change that to Sharmeen. Ayaan's mum. Close right. Saving the blooper by a very close call.

Thanks🤗

Originally posted by: NAVI55

Unres on page 11😃

Do have a look🤗

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

NAVI,

Thanks so much and please convey my humble gratitude to your staff. Please don't get into trouble with the Boss because of this FF.

Sailor Zoya ! Now you have we rolling on the floor, Is she Butt Sqe=ueezing Asad!

I know what you are picturing now.😆

Thank you so so much. I will take all of it .😃

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Juliet.. That was a good update... The first scene when Asad got roses but witnessed Zafar giving roses ... The words can definately drive Asad crazy ... His pain ... Beautifully written... 👏 👏 .So he again goes missing for 2 days... I would have loved to see few more lines here on what both went through those 2 days...

Finally all misunderstandings cleared... 😊 I guess you will clear out Zafar's complicated love story to Asad because I feel he still needs to trust Zoya... I may be wrong but what I feel at this point is no doubt he loves her immensely but still trust level could be low...

He saved her dad's house again after all this... Hats off to this guy's love for Mrs. Khan 😊

Finally whole family is there ... 😊.

Originally posted by: saida.m

This is what happens when we live so far apart. The time difference sucks so bad. Nine pages worth of comments before I even discovered the new thread and update!

😭

Anyhoo!

Congratulations on the new thread! 🤗

Zafar, as always the worst possible timing. 😆

Why is it that Asad always manages to hear the words that would make him spiral down the tunnel of pain?

That little miss whats her name - she better run for the hills. How dare she slip that pill into the glass?

Well, on the other hand, I guess it rather the two of them to come closer, no?

That Bottom song! 🤣🤣🤣

FINALLY! Finally the two of them had a decent conversations, followed by a very indecent activity, WHICH I LOVED! 😆

I really REALLY wanted to smack Ayaan! He should know better not to disturb if he knew Asad and Zoya were in there together. How inconsiderate! 😆

GIVE ME!!!

☺️☺️☺️

Originally posted by: NAVI55

Hey😃

Don't worry, I can handle the boss...😉

He's my brother😆

I do try to make people laugh😆 but you actually do so much more...You keep us entertained and enthralled with this FF...

I'm so a butt person...There's something about a high firm muscled butt that does things too me...My butterflies are salivating right now...

The picture I've conjured just wont leave my head now😆😉

I'm seeing butts...stars and more butts😆😉

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