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-StarsLinedUp-

@-StarsLinedUp-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

res...i've read it already...n will comment on it soon😉

Unres

Hmm...the word...flippin...fantastic...

cos the story has flipped once again...gone are the days of lonely misunderstandings..n useless ego...back r the days...of raunchy...romance..and flirty conversations...just loved the tunraround of the update...n m gald that...Asad is giving another chance..to the relationship..that gave him everything...which he so rashly decided..to throw out of the window...but thanks to Zoya..she just..barged into his closed walls with a bull dozer of...LOVE...n never dying mad conviction..n made him see beyond the color red...it had its share of emotions..but u put the cherry on the cake by their...breakfast..badass romance..BTW nice pick..watermelon...😆..cos it always manages to drip..now doesnt it😛...n here comes the band wagon with the family...now thats going to be a whole new set of fun..n stolen...moments of romance...

cant wait...so..update...sooner than ur soon😉

Edited by starslinedup - 11 years ago

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

BLOOPER ALERT :

My intelligent readers caught a very serious blooper in Chapter 28.

I mentioned Shireen as Aayaan's Mum in my last update.

But then I had mentioned Shireen to also be Rashid's second wife.

This is what happens when I write updates in mad rush and don't proof read.😕🤪

But Kalyani caught me on that and I graciously thank her for bringing that to my notice.

Another error due to lack of proof reading was the line, Zoya had half a sandwich and then I forced her for some juice. Those were Maria's lines. Both Prashni and Kalyani pointed that out.

I just forgot to add that.

I have corrected the above mentioned points. Aayaan's mum is Sharmeen now.😆

Maria's lines have been added. No promises there could be more errors. Extreme apologies for the of errors. I still haven't had time to read the update again so more bloopers could be present. I will proof read it as soon as I get some time.

Much love and thanks for reading!

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Urvi Saini

@urvisaini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

thanks for including Mia's song

I love that gal

always bringing smile on asya's faces

OMG what did u do ?

2 bedroom cottage mein itne sare logo lo daal diya😈

whats on your mind

office romance

or asya pretending to go for work and landing in hotel or may be house back in Bhopal?

my dirty mind was wondering...

bechara asad tanhai mein hi sahi mountain trekking to ki which definitely means he's got great stamina..

you still sure they'll have only 7 and not 18???😉

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vinita459

@vinita459

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Awesome chapter :) really liked it. I am so glad things finally got cleared between ASad and Zoya. I was literally laughing so hard when Ayaan ruined AsYa's passionate moment. I was like 'not over here too' 😆

Still waiting for that honeymoon 😳 please update sooner 😊

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

hey juliet not a prob as we understand...! 😛

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Bloody cockblocking family! 😡

no one and i mean no one can come in between my seven!

Bagina rules! Zafar sucks! whatever just keep him away from AsYa and Asad is a dickhead! who throws away perfectly good 60 long stemmed roses! He could've just given it to me I would've take great care of them. 🤔

And you are evil I asked you to get rid of Flavia so you got Cieanna! wicked you are Juliet! 😳

but then its good you left Cieanna waiting! she deserved it!

And can i just say I'm glad Zoya pulled out that stunt. it was needed. I was tired of Asad misunderstanding her. the day you made Asad leave I had imagined Zoya to do something exactly like that because i believe thats the only way that idiot with a thick skull would listen! 😆

@simi - i found another similar gif! this one has Chandler too 🤣

whoops i forgot to give you, your dose of Asad!

PS - I have saved the best one for when I get the seven! 🤣

Edited by --starstruck-- - 11 years ago

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: --starstruck--
Bloody cockblocking family! 😡

no one and i mean no one can come in between my seven!

Bagina rules! Zafar sucks! whatever just keep him away from AsYa and Asad is a dickhead! who throws away perfectly good 60 long stemmed roses! He could've just given it to me I would've take great care of them. 🤔

And you are evil I asked you to get rid of Flavia so you got Cieanna! wicked you are Juliet! 😳

but then its good you left Cieanna waiting! she deserved it!

And can i just say I'm glad Zoya pulled out that stunt. it was needed. I was tired of Asad misunderstanding her. the day you made Asad leave I had imagined Zoya to do something exactly like that because i believe thats the only way that idiot with a thick skull would listen! 😆

@simi - i found another similar gif! this one has Chandler too 🤣

whoops i forgot to give you, your dose of Asad!

PS - I have saved the best one for when I get the seven! 🤣

😆😆😆

My thoughts exactly

Someone wants her seven really bad😉😉😉

What if we don't get it dear sadie😕

I want to see the one you saved for last please😉😉

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: NAVI55
😆😆😆
My thoughts exactly

Someone wants her seven really bad😉😉😉

What if we don't get it dear sadie😕

I want to see the one you saved for last please😉😉

I read fifty shades and after 100 pages of book one I couldn't read it anymore. Things I wanted to do to Christian's ball and cock when he spanked.🤢.

But What I learnt from those 100 pages was Anticipation is the key.

So keep the anticipation going. I may or may not surprise you.

Initially I thought I will play with words and leave it to peoples imagination. I wanted to not go into explicit content cos kids live on this forum😳 and I don't want to corrupt them but then we have the desperate 18 year olds who have began reading this FF only for the desirable seven.😆

TO TWIST OR NOT TO TWIST! to hump or not to hump! Is the question.

I might do a mix and fix. But It is in Chapter 30. SO ... LOOONNNG wait! still!😛 One more chapter to go.

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Hy juliet wen u vl update nxt chappi

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: --starstruck--
Bloody cockblocking family! 😡

no one and i mean no one can come in between my seven!

Bagina rules! Zafar sucks! whatever just keep him away from AsYa and Asad is a dickhead! who throws away perfectly good 60 long stemmed roses! He could've just given it to me I would've take great care of them. 🤔

And you are evil I asked you to get rid of Flavia so you got Cieanna! wicked you are Juliet! 😳

but then its good you left Cieanna waiting! she deserved it!

And can i just say I'm glad Zoya pulled out that stunt. it was needed. I was tired of Asad misunderstanding her. the day you made Asad leave I had imagined Zoya to do something exactly like that because i believe thats the only way that idiot with a thick skull would listen! 😆

@simi - i found another similar gif! this one has Chandler too 🤣

whoops i forgot to give you, your dose of Asad!

PS - I have saved the best one for when I get the seven! 🤣

Sadie Ji,

I don't know why we call it cock blocker. I mean yes very imp part of the anatomy but if it is cock blocker it is also pussy shocker!

Oh the fun when family is around and you want to sneak and peak😉. I mean PEAK! NOT Peek!

You know you influence my content big time Sadie.

That 18 wala dream was not supposed to happen. But I made that happen for you because you winched.

Now when I thought I will play wicked with horny innuendoes and leave it to guess work. You are presenting this GIF as a bribe or bartar trade off which is giving me this terrible itch.

GAH!!!! OK YOU WILL GET YOUR SEVEN! Happy Now!

Edited by Perfectionist2 - 11 years ago

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