AsYa FF/Thread IV/ The Butterflies! - Page 9

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

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I am seeing naked cupid butts now, all thanks to you!😛

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Juliet.. That was a good update... The first scene when Asad got roses but witnessed Zafar giving roses ... The words can definately drive Asad crazy ... His pain ... Beautifully written... 👏 👏 .So he again goes missing for 2 days... I would have loved to see few more lines here on what both went through those 2 days...

Finally all misunderstandings cleared... 😊 I guess you will clear out Zafar's complicated love story to Asad because I feel he still needs to trust Zoya... I may be wrong but what I feel at this point is no doubt he loves her immensely but still trust level could be low...

He saved her dad's house again after all this... Hats off to this guy's love for Mrs. Khan 😊

Finally whole family is there ... 😊.

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Hey Devika,

I so look forward to what you have to say? It gets very interesting, your point of view.

You are the only one so far who questioned the two days.

Just wanted to say Those two days are very crucial moving forward. IT holds the story to a new dimension. You are very smart, I hope I didn't give away too much.😛

As a writer, I found Asad asking Zoya to choose again, telling her he needed her more, and then accepting defeat was the most difficult, at her mercy and vulnerable moment for Asad. I felt emotional when I imagined it. Not sure if I could put that in words.

You are right Asad's trust is in initial stages but the circumstances are never in his favor to let him learn to trust. At least now he is willing to give it a shot.

Reading your comments are very enjoyable always so thank you.😊

congrats on new thread
awesome update
desperate means calls for desperate measures
poor asad that he was gonna disappear again thank god
cant believed that b***** drugged zoya
oh zoya u pulled out all the stops
the entire ammunition came but all is fixed thank god
now the people needs that seven badly and the house is full but
I dont think there is no stopping them
after all there is her cottage too.
continue soon

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Will you virtually kill me if I omit the mature part and just do something awkward and leave it to peoples imaginations.😛

I am still thinking. Don't Do THAT persuasion spell Simi.

@ saida.m , GIF you just posted is just soo cool. Loved it. Haha😆😆

Zoya's song for Asad...! 🤣
Ayaan and family's wrong timing..! 😡
Loved Asad..! ❤️
Butterflies conversation was short but loved it...!
Overall it was amazing,funny and beautiful written...!
Update soon..!

My second comment on why I loved the last chapter. 😳

Originally posted by: Prashni

My second comment on why I loved the last chapter. 😳

I really dislike Zafar! 😒 Please make him disappear from AsYa's life, I love living in a bubble when reading this FF! 🤪

I regret the fact that Zoya doesn't know Asad got her 60 red roses for everyday they were miserable 😔 I love them both, I don't blame Asad for the past 2 months of pain they experienced. 😳

I was disappointed with Asad for entertaining Cieanna, what was he thinking wanting to accompany her to her hotel room. 👎🏼 I know he wouldn't have done anything he shouldn't be doing, just as Zoya with the broken bottle. Cant help but be a loyalist! 😳

Frantic Asad and the scene in the Garden ☺️

I guess the conversation with the doctor was written in error, because they hadn't met for 2 days! 😊 But it doesn't matter, I still loved it! 😳

Breakfast and everything that happened after was beautiful! ☺️

Loved Asad reprimanding Zoya and the conversation that followed was much needed! ❤️

The rest was history after that! 🤣 The romance was adorable!

Ayaan and Family (like their sense of humor though), and a houseful of guests! 😒

I am your fan, this concept is novel material! ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏

Hey Prashni,