AsYa FF/Thread IV/ The Butterflies!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thread Four Of The Butterflies!

I surprised myself. In a good way surprised that you guys want to read what my mind summaries as a story of insects that exist in the female leads stomach. How bizarre!

But in all seriousness I hope I am able to provide my readers with some entertainment for the time they invest reading my updates.

I hope I stand up to your expectations and give this story a beautiful deserving finale. The story ends with Chapter 35. Seven more chapters to go so hop on if you believe in love or even if you are a skeptic just reading for a good time pass.

Thread Four is about leap of faith, passion and second attempts at making things right.

A BIG THANK YOU to all my reader for encouraging me in every step of this journey.

Thread IV:
Chapter 28 - Page 1
Chapter 29 - Page 55
Chapter 30A - Page 85
Threads:
If anyone is interested there is this OS I wrote, here is the link - The Giant Ferris Wheel!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Firstly, you dint mentioned my reason of liking. It is I HATE Zafar 😡 😆
Agar ye kambhakhat na ayaa hota toh we could hav get Seven in this update only without any disturbance of family members 🤔 :P

But am grateful that misunderstandings didn't lived longer thanks to Zoya's wild attempt!
Zoya's Song for Asad 🤣

Damn i want seven in all variations ok? =))

How my poor babies will satisfy their needs in house full of family members!
I wanna see it soon.
So update soonish 😉

Ps. Badhayiaan naye Thread ki 😃
Edited by -RM- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here we have thread 4
Reserved
Unreserved

Damn Ayaan and family, wrong timing!! should have let them complete their business.
But what caught my eye and satisfied me for now is what Asad said "Would you like all seven screaming or would you prefer variety". Thank goodness this is still in. Haha. the seven are near

Brilliant Update Juliet and a super brilliant title. Well, I am team action but i do believe words hold an important place in a relationship. Words should be used wisely. Over the time i guess Asad and Zoya are taking a leap in their relation with trust and right use of words. This is commendable. The entire scene was amazingly written in the reception area. Beautiful dialogues on trust. No its time for some action 😉 I was scared in the beginning that another set of misunderstandings but glad it got cleared.

oh the Song of Bottoms😆😆. I am guessing from where is this idea coming. Haha. Loved it. "Performance Anxiety" cant stop laughing. There is always something uniquely humorous in your update. You are very innovative.
I love the poshness in your story. Bentley hmm, stars, stock market, shares. Superb



Edited by jasminerose - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved d update so mch...
Atlast dey r together now...hope dere z no separation again.
Eagerly waiting for ur nxt update.
Edited by samara5 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Juliet 😳🤗
Congratulations on new thread🥳
i wrote a long comment for u few days back n accidently closed the window
asad again misunderstands zoya.. thinking she wants divorce..
hearing the conversation between zoya n zafar... asad again heartbroken..💔
he goes missing for few days..😕
zoya's presentation a success😃
she questions asad for going missing
both have an argument again.. where asad asks her to make a choice..
zoya tries to explain zafar needs her..
asad again misunderstanding n considering himself a fool who never learns😭
zoya threatening to hurt herself with broken bottles😒
asad pulling her into that possessive hug😳
okayy i hate this cienna😡🤢
the conversation with the doctor was hillarious🤣 zoya abt to blurt out abt being a virgin😆
and then the Song of Bottoms🤣
watermelon romance☺️
performance anxiety☺️
zafar again interested in a married woman
zoya's demand of a tiny chunk of trust😳
ayaan n the whole family landing up there ughh
how will my asad give the 7 now🤣
Romance Queen u r just perfect👏
every update is more n more interesting😳
love ur writings!!!👍🏼
super dooper awesome update😃❤️

Maha

Edited by maha2012 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finally... was waiting for this... thank u dear.. u rock
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres!!
congrats for the new thread!! 👏

finally...everything at its place...n yeh zafar ko married ladies hi kyun pasand hain?? 😡
that stunt zoya pulled though dangerous...was really brave n won asad back for her!!
loved the bottom song or anthem?? ehh!?? 😆

n seven in heaven with family...No!! Hell No!!
😲
waise zoya ka cottage khali hai...
koi nahi hai kamre mein...kya haseen mila hai pal... 😉
continue soon
Edited by -Crazy4AsYa- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Juliet 😃

First Congratulation for this new thread you really deserve it 🥳🤗
And thank you so much for the dedication 🤗

Ohh no my poor Asad just when he was ready to return with her

Wow Zoya scane was very emotional when Asad was leaving she can't tolarate any other separation i loved this scene👏

And when they are with the Dr " I'm still vir.." Asad reaction 😆

And ... AND they finally talked like real adult it was time 😡

Why did Ayan come ( this kebaab)😡😆 and Asad said to Zoya to be quiet because he want Ayan to leave 🤣🤣

LOL even Dilshad is there ... no all the familly came 😆😆

Once again awesome update 👏

Continue soon please 🤗


Edited by akaswan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats fr new thread. ..
Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congo for new thread🥳
i got a heart attack on hearing divorce from zafar
poor asad😭
Cieanna what the hell she need??😡
girls wont leave a handsome man roam around city😆
Careful Cieanna! It is my wife you are talking about!" Asad dangerously alerted without even looking at Zoya.😆good... man👏👏
how dare she tried to hurt zoya😡
actually i'm appericiating zoya' antics😆😆
their talk about being virgin and treck🤣
i love that song😉
finally misunderatangins are over
now i need seven😳😉😆
Edited by CHOCOSWATHI - 11 years ago

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