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Posted: 11 years ago

#761

I personally love ur ff... luvd this part

continue soon..
awsum Update... 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#762

Originally posted by: akh20
okk so i read this also!! first kiss superb!! private jokes awesome!! claryfications amazing!! waiting for marriage n confession now!!

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Confession is also gonna come sooon 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: kals82
hia dear,
that is one awesome update...

nice to see the way zoya questioned asad about the evil...

but still asad is not able to accpet that,... and on top he is thinking about sameer instead of the devil..

i want the devil to be complelety exposed infornt of asad.. and he should relase wht his friendship cost him 10 yrs.. with his love..

and the kiss was cute... and what is the indise joke about the apple..

is it.. apple a day.. keeps the doctor away.. and zoya doesnt want asad to eat apple.. as it is suppose to keep her away..from him..
zoya wanting the shawl in the car.. so sweet...

atlast they have taken the first step on their physical love..

awesome update..

will wait for thrusday.. to see how asad looks after the sneezing zoya.. and i want them to steal some kissed in between in the ofiice. too

love it

Thank You Kalyani 😃

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haha he will come to know about devil sooon 😳

Yah its the same joke ,, I guess I used that quote in chapter 14 I guess about apples 😆

Will try to update soon 😉

LoL kisses in the hospital ?? Will try ,, I hope no one is gonna catch them making up in hospital 😲😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: AAKKSG
I missed 2 updates😭

haaaww but u can read it now Sania 😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Ramlath
Wow... Awesome update...
I just loved it...
Pls continue soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#766

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
interesting update..continue soon..😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#767

Originally posted by: Rosered1
Awesome :) Tachycardia again lol

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: eshita.kabhi
hey :)
this is one of my fvrt stories here

Keep up the good work dear

love
eshita

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It really means alot to me 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: anopama
nice update
jealousy can make u do crazy things
wow asad u punch the guy y cant u see
your friend sherish intentions as zoya said u r
blind 10 yrs back and now also ur friend is no good
loved how he asked her y she didnt come back she always
tell hi he is emotionally challenge so she should have take
the initiative and y didnt she think how he felt.poor baby
still he cant confess how he feels and now he wants an apple
too keep the doctor away really
continue soon she catch a cold

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