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Posted: 11 years ago

#751

Originally posted by: -Shormi-
bubble baby u r gr8 coz u let dem kiss after 10 yrs of marriage😛...such a kanjus writer u r🤣
oops confession awaiting😳
i luvd ayan's detective giri😎
an apple a day keeps a doc away...wow!!!Mrs. Khan applying dat psychology😆
on a whole it ws an awesum ud⭐️
oh my no cliffy😲
btw cn i expect confession 2 tk place at nx part🤔

haha yah I am so cruel na ?? Actually I don't like Zoya kissing Asad ,,

soo I make sure that its always too late 😎🤣

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Yah I thought to surprise you all with no cliffy update 😳😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: vinita459
Good chapter. I still don't understand Asad's hypocrite behavior :)
Chalo, some progress in their relationship:). Update soon :)

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LoL he is not a hypocrite anymore ,, he is trying his best to change ,,

and whatever happened in the past was done from both sides 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: farz_parachute
Amazing part.

Brilliance at its best.

Love the flair in which you write, and love your description on the scene.

And I love the rain.

I still feel Zoya has had it worse. She was treated like an unwanted person and to have witness what she had..and be taunted and put down. Asad had it relatively easier. Hmm. am loving this shade of them.

I hope it would truly come to him the knowledge of Seherish's truth. And then I want him to repent. And feel awful. And I want real road to redemption scenes. And for Zoya to wholeheartedly forgive him and balm his heart's wound. Hmmm..

Mwahhh for such a great update!!

Sorry hasn't been commenting...am using mobile mostly...so always won't have the opportunity to comment.

Looking forward to next part.

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haha OMG I can't believe that it was that goood ,,

yah Zoya had a worse situation but some readers wanted Asad to tell Zoya what he had gone thru ,,

thats why I added that but yah ofcourse Asad will realize hhis mistake after Sehrish is out of mask 😳

ohh thats okie ,, u r loving my story thats enough for me 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe
awesome update loved it thanks for the pm

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: jawria123
Finally AsYa first kiss☺️
Awesome update
loved it
Ayan is so funny😆
continue soon :)

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haha yah long wait for them to kiss so I finally did it 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: yashasvi_88
Nice update

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: princess101
AMAZING UPDATE 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: skavya
Wow...!!!!! superb update...
their first kiss...in the rain...so cute...
like their convo about past...
continue soon...
Thanks for pm 😊

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