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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

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Haha i know I have made you wait enough for this one but i am not so cruel...I am finally here to end you wait😆😆You know it was so hard to get my head around the fact that this is the last time that I am commenting on Yes Boss but well I had to do it one day and I think I am finally ready to bid Yes Boss adieu albeit with a heavy heart...


This story is very close to my heart Green coz not only did your Anu find her zoya in her story she found her in real life too😳😳As the story started and I was introduced I actually started living this story Green...With time I may have become very infrequent on the forum but I always came back for my office😆😆It's a bitter sweet feeling to see this story end but well it had to end one day and I am glad it ended is such a beautiful way😳😳

Well now lets talk about the amazing update😃😃


"Zoya, the door is closed and locked. But if it still makes you uncomfortable, then I won't push it," Asad made clear, resigning to his fate. He removed Zoya's hands from her bra and mechanically took over the job of hooking it back. Zoya watched him silently, falling into deep thought.
I loved how you showed their hesitation...It isn't just about being physical but doing everything right and I loved how Asad understood her😳😳



"Zoya, we started way before that, since the time you unsuspectingly walked into my well-organized life, even if you and I hadn't become us yet. We just didn't know it then," Asad corrected her, a small smile growing on his face.
I loved that they strarted talking about their past and reminiscing about their past...
Makes it so realistic and sweet...😳😳When something good happens you always think about the road to that and you portrayed that beautifully Green😳😳



Zoya explained carefully, not entirely sure herself about why she changed her mind. All she knew is that everything had finally fallen into place, and it just felt... right.
These lines are perfect...I belive there is no perfect moment for anything..you may plan a lot but sometimes things may not go according to plan..just do it when it feels right😳😳



Her hands fell away immediately, when Asad took a sudden step forward, pressing his lips against hers as he claimed them. She felt his hands trail up to her shoulders, brushing away the straps and finally removing the bra from her body altogether.
I loved how showed Zoya's hesitation and worry when Asad took his time...So finally the bra is off😆😆Good thing Zoya did half the job this time😆😆😆



Zoya gasped and allowed Asad's urgent tongue to enter her mouth, as it battled with her own. She felt Asad's hands fondle her breasts gently, and she felt a rush of tingle of energy zap through her upper body, ending in a slight throbbing between her thighs.
Hawwt hawwt hawwt☺️☺️☺️I was blushing so hard while reading this and I still am...Good thing I am alone right now😆😆



Her fingers darted aimlessly, and she brushed an unusual hardness below the belt, making her gasp and pull her hand back. A soft rumble echoed in the silence of the room as Asad unsuccessfully suppressed his laughter at the back of his throat.
Ohk so the paras that followed were super hawttt...i know this was your first time writing something like this but it was hawtt and yet not too much...It was just perfect Green😳😳And man i couldn't stop blushing and smiling when i read the word 'hard'☺️☺️☺️


"Aapka OCD ka ata pata hi nahi raha," Zoya giggled as she turned to look at the mess upon hearing the clutter of items hit the ground. Asad growled playfully as he nipped her ear and placed her on the desk again, making her giggle more.
Haha i love that even in the most romantic moments they don't fail to tease each other...I love how you maintain the essence of the characters in every possible situation perfectly😃


"You know, it's not true that I'm never satisfied with you, Mr Khan. I'm more than satisfied today... many times over," Zoya commented, giggling as Asad blew on her face playfully while she spoke.
I love Zoya's naughty side...she was never the one to shy away and I am glad she didn't here either😳


"I'm satisfied that you're satisfied," Asad replied cheekily, as Zoya lifted her head and rested it on his chest, listening to his heartbeat. He wrapped his arm around her shoulders and held her close that way, dropping a kiss on the top of her head. And this was going to last... forever.
Perfect lines to end a perfect story Green...As I said i know you will give us the happily ever after and you did make us wait for long but the wait was totally worth it😃


About the note,I knew how uncomfortable this update has been to write but you did an amazing job Green...It was the perfect combination of hawtness,sweetness,teasing nad romance...I love the light moments between Asya..they balance the hawtness perfectly...

About their first time being in office...I think when you want something and you feel its right it isn't about where or when you are its about the time and if they felt it was the right time I am happy😃

Haha and you last line may be a little lame but its perfect...you know how much I love happily ever afters...

About your next story...I may or may not watch QH,i may not feel for Asya anymore but if my Green writes something her Anu will always be there to read it😃😃

Thanku for this wonderful story Green...It was your most hilarious one so far and I enjoyed every bits of it especially when I was there😆😆😆This story is very close to my heart Green and thanku for making this such a woderful experience...


Love you loads meri Green❤️❤️



Anu (: You're one of the main reasons I even bother to write haha. I'm glad that Yes Boss found a place in your heart (: And gosh, your comments made ME blush and smile too hahaha. Like I told you before as well, writing this was way more difficult than I had imagined, and so I'm really glad you still found it sufficiently hot haha.

Anyway, I know how much you love happily ever afters... just about as much as I do :p I'm really really happy after reading this, I can't even express it haha. Love you too Anu <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the story honey! ❤️
Good job! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
going to catch up this finally

had read till chapter 9 earlier and so many parts to go

sorry for the delay
Edited by --Mahima-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 10-

after reading this part... the old story flashed back... i had thought i would have to read till part 9 again

For the first time I thought Zoya was wrong... she did make a mess and she should have informed others

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 11,12 and 13-

loved Zoya's resume

Vijay spells trouble


moving to thread 2 now
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 14,15 and 16-

Vijay doesn't seem so scary now to me... well lets see war happens next

Zoya and the rumours.. wondering war will she do next

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 17-
the bicycle scene is so cute

I so loved it

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 18 and 19-

Asad is clearly jealous

But the model... oh no

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 20 to 23-

I know exactly what Asad is going to do now

Its like KItni Mohabbat Hai a bit

really excited to read it

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 24 and 25-

another thread completed... moving to the thread now

I loved the kiss totally... drooling over it

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