FF: Yes Boss #4 - Last part on pg 71 (14/3)

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#581

Oh no the last part...this makes me sad.

I had to re-read this chapter and boy I did not regret doing so.

As much as I wanted to give you a long comment for this one, I could not because if so then I would had to quote the whole chapter since it was that...well, you know what I want to say right.

A very nice end, I must say. Just Mr. Khan with his Zoya, back in the office and completing their journey right where it all begun.

Very good written, nothing vulgar. Loved the satisfaction lines at the end...

So finally, my comments are done. Won't bother you any further.

Ha! Bad joke... don't think I will leave you that soon. You already have another one in store for us so let me start with that one.

Green, thank you sooo much for sharing this very nice light hearted, hilarious and very romantic story!

You are one of my favorites! 👏

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#582

Originally posted by: metoyou
Oh no the last part...this makes me sad.
I had to re-read this chapter and boy I did not regret doing so.
As much as I wanted to give you a long comment for this one, I could not because if so then I would had to quote the whole chapter since it was that...well, you know what I want to say right.

A very nice end, I must say. Just Mr. Khan with his Zoya, back in the office and completing their journey right where it all begun.
Very good written, nothing vulgar. Loved the satisfaction lines at the end...

So finally, my comments are done. Won't bother you any further.
Ha! Bad joke... don't think I will leave you that soon. You already have another one in store for us so let me start with that one.

Green, thank you sooo much for sharing this very nice light hearted, hilarious and very romantic story!
You are one of my favorites! 👏

And you are one of my favourite readers Miss Narges! Haha I'm sure this story was evidence enough :p Maybe I ought to write another part to this, where RK mall is finally made :p I'm glad you liked it, especially this last part! I had a real hard time writing it haha, I was trying my level best not to be vulgar, and I'm glad you felt that way (: Start on the next story asap!! (:

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#583

Originally posted by: goingreen

And you are one of my favourite readers Miss Narges! Haha I'm sure this story was evidence enough :p Maybe I ought to write another part to this, where RK mall is finally made :p I'm glad you liked it, especially this last part! I had a real hard time writing it haha, I was trying my level best not to be vulgar, and I'm glad you felt that way (: Start on the next story asap!! (:

Thank you so much, Greenie! Like I always say: the best writers deserve the best readers 😉

Neki aur pooch pooch?! Start writing about the RK mall, right now! LOL!

I absolutely loved this FF for all the cliche reasons you can think of. Will start with the new story soon 😊

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#584

Where Ru green

I reread this entire ff

Loved it

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#585

That was so good
I thought I wouldn't read anymore zoya asad stories
But I'm so glad I read this cus I love office romance stories

The writing is amazing
The characters were described perfectly
Asad is so bold in this story love it
Zoya goofy smart strong love it

Overall amazing job
I'm gonna start reading another story of yours
I really hope you're still on this forum and still writing cus you're really good
And hopefully you'll write something on ahil sanam
And love your comments after each part

Thanks !