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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...KSGmiAmor...

Green

this story was absolutely wonderful
i love all of your stories
u write so lovely
what started in the office ended in the office ...lovd it
and going to last forever

plzzz dont stop writing
i will miss u
hope u return soon with another wonderful story
*fingers cross*



Thank you so much (: You've always been very kind in all your comments throughout the story, and I really appreciate that (: I'm glad you enjoyed the story! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Oh Green,

That was beautifully written. I simply loved it. And yes I wanted it 😳 ahem aheem IT, to be in the office on that Desk. I mean the FF is YES BOSS!
Boss should take ownership of his deeds in the office right.
I loved it. I got exams and have been busy but I still have to catch up on the rest of the chapters before 30.
Happy to know it ended satisfactory😛
Thanks for this story.
Much love



He sure should :p Hope you enjoy the first 30 chapters just as much too haha would love to hear from you after that (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

aww green it's over? with some action 😆


I never expected you to finish what u started there but whoa it was good! Great in fact if this was ur first time writing such stuff. it was not too explicit and yet hot! great work out there!

Well i'll just wait for another of your FF! 😃



Hahaha yes, I wasn't even sure how to write it, but I tried haha. Glad you still liked it Sadie (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

This was perfect, seen as though their romance started in office so their first time makes sense hehe
Loved the ending, will you be writing a epilogue



Glad you liked it (: Nah I don't think I will, I mean I don't have anything left to add hahaha.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rajsmi

Sad to see it end...Personally, I would have preferred an extra "I Love You" in the end...Perhaps I am old fashioned :-(

You are a very good writer and I look forward to reading more!

Shall add you to my buddy list. Hope you can PM me your future stories. Thank You!



Haha and I'm against saying I love you :p I mean at least in the case of these two egoistic nuts haha. Their actions speak louder than their words most of the time anyway :p Glad you liked it! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Splash-ASYA

u should start something new..
if u r not planning to then i beg u to start a good storyy...
i am a crazyy fan of ur stories.. i have read them more then 2 times.. i read yes boss i guess 3 times n mangalpur maddness n through the monsoon tou i have forgotten how many times i have read it..
soo u hope u start something new sooon.. n watever it is pm me for the first update or prolouge or watever its called.. then i will definitelyy follow.. dont think u wont have readers.. i am sure everyone is as crzy abt ur writings as i am...

well coming to the last part...
amazing it was...
i am glad that u showed the first time in the office cox the whole storyy was based on office... so i am happy with that...
no prob with the ending line... it does happen sometimes.. i am happy that u finished it on an ideal time but sad as well cox there wont be anyy Yes Boss updates...
anyway i just wanna say that u r an amazing writer..
do continue to write... 😊


-fuii-



Oh gosh haha that's so sweet! It's always very heartwarming to hear that anyone's re-reading my works (: I'm really glad you enjoyed this story, and all of my stories in fact haha. Thank you so much for all the love (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: starslinedup

The story came a full circle...It ended where it started..and they were finally together..accepting each other for more than just the present moment...You truly handled the story and its moment..with grace, humour and alot of love...I had laughs..I has my aww moments..and I just loved reading the story...as it went...Truly wonderful...Gr8 goin Gal...n hopefully u'll continue to write...as I have faith that...u'll get readers without a doubt...Everyone here is always ready for a good read...so Hopefully u'll think bout it...n come up with something new...Until then...Enjoy and smile always!!😉



Ah yes haha that's what I was trying to achieve! Ending where it started. I'm glad you enjoyed the story this much (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sarbrathan

Completely wrong!😡

You will always have readers that will follow you, including me!
I know you don't send pms, so it will be really hard to find your stories in the fanfiction forum, but I will happily come over and try finding them. You will always have readers! Even I don't want to be on this forum anymore. After 🤬 change, I only comment on fanfiction nothing else. I am still watching the show and liking it but I refuse to be part of a bais forum. Wherever you decide to upload your new work, I will follow it always👍🏼
I don't like office romance but I am not against it! I am sorry if my comments ever offended or troubled you... I believe in honest comments and I really am a fan😊



Oh no no, I'm not shifting anything to the FF forum until the rules are changed or whatever. The FF forum is a huge mess, I have no intention of joining that mess haha.

Anyway, I don't have an issue with the forum that way, I too still watch the show and actively participate in discussions if I get the time. It's just that for me, this place has always been just a place to come and discuss QH and its characters, I have never had any serious interest in participating in discussions about the actors other than their acting abilities, because that's not what QH is about.

But now, there's a lot of unhappiness on the forum, I don't even understand why. IF actor and forum ratings, are all things that make no difference to my life personally, and I'm pretty sure it makes no difference to the actors' lives and the producers' lives either. But now there's so much campaigning and petitioning and boycotting and whatnot, and I wish that were not the case. But oh well.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sarbrathan

Gosh I feel like I am spamming your story now but after your note I realized you read and probably replied to my comment SO I tried to find it...
I know you are smarter than Gul and basically a really good writer, so you won't stretch your story. Sequal are good but pointless dragging is stupid and like I said you are a good writer, so kind of knew you wouldn't do it.
My stance is a personal one. I don't want to sit or touch furniture where others have gotten busy! Don't mean to be explicit here but I don't want to touch or see the residue... Sadly, in real life I have seen two used condoms... once in school (when I was 15) and another time right outside the office (co-op placement) which was REALLY bizarre. Bizarre because there was underwear as well and I was 16. Now I am 19 and after those experiences, I am not squeamish about it and I can deal with it but I would rather not see it.



No worries about sharing your opinion about doing it in the office haha, I didn't take any offense. I myself am pretty young (if it's not already obvious haha) and know nuts about this kinda stuff, but yeah, I just wanted it this way because you know, it's an office romance, wanted it to end at the office as well haha. But anyway, no worries, hope I didn't offend you!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-

LAST PART?! :O

You better be writing a new story, Green! >:(
Res. :)
Unresss. :P
It's over! It definitely was your craziest story, but we all loved it! Even though you tortured us countless times with your cruel cliffies. 😆
You're an awesome writer, and of course people will read your next story! 😡 Don't be silly. 😆
My favorite parts were the cute little romances between Asad and Zoya in the office. 😳 Just the little kisses and stuff like that. ❤️ Especially when they fell asleep and he kissed her on the nose, a while ago. AW.
So, pleasepleaseplease write something new! 😭 Hurry up and get an idea, will you? 😆
Here's to the end of a fantastic journey! LOVE! 🤗
-Fari. 😳 ❤️



Fari! Long time no see haha. See now the good news is that at least there'll be no more cliffys and no more torturing :p I'm glad you enjoyed this story as much as you did (:

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