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Posted: 11 years ago
Sad to see it end...Personally, I would have preferred an extra "I Love You" in the end...Perhaps I am old fashioned :-(
You are a very good writer and I look forward to reading more!

Shall add you to my buddy list. Hope you can PM me your future stories. Thank You!
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Posted: 11 years ago
u should start something new..
if u r not planning to then i beg u to start a good storyy...
i am a crazyy fan of ur stories.. i have read them more then 2 times.. i read yes boss i guess 3 times n mangalpur maddness n through the monsoon tou i have forgotten how many times i have read it..
soo u hope u start something new sooon.. n watever it is pm me for the first update or prolouge or watever its called.. then i will definitelyy follow.. dont think u wont have readers.. i am sure everyone is as crzy abt ur writings as i am...

well coming to the last part...
amazing it was...
i am glad that u showed the first time in the office cox the whole storyy was based on office... so i am happy with that...
no prob with the ending line... it does happen sometimes.. i am happy that u finished it on an ideal time but sad as well cox there wont be anyy Yes Boss updates...
anyway i just wanna say that u r an amazing writer..
do continue to write... 😊


-fuii-

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Posted: 11 years ago

The story came a full circle...It ended where it started..and they were finally together..accepting each other for more than just the present moment...You truly handled the story and its moment..with grace, humour and alot of love...I had laughs..I has my aww moments..and I just loved reading the story...as it went...Truly wonderful...Gr8 goin Gal...n hopefully u'll continue to write...as I have faith that...u'll get readers without a doubt...Everyone here is always ready for a good read...so Hopefully u'll think bout it...n come up with something new...Until then...Enjoy and smile always!!😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
Dis was my first time I'm commenting here I think bcz I'm bit lazy haha
I always loved d office romance of AsYa and I gonna miss it for sure :(...
I completely enjoyed ur story and u won't loose ur readers especially me..
Continue a new story soon and do pm me..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haha i know I have made you wait enough for this one but i am not so cruel...I am finally here to end you wait😆😆You know it was so hard to get my head around the fact that this is the last time that I am commenting on Yes Boss but well I had to do it one day and I think I am finally ready to bid Yes Boss adieu albeit with a heavy heart...


This story is very close to my heart Green coz not only did your Anu find her zoya in her story she found her in real life too😳😳As the story started and I was introduced I actually started living this story Green...With time I may have become very infrequent on the forum but I always came back for my office😆😆It's a bitter sweet feeling to see this story end but well it had to end one day and I am glad it ended is such a beautiful way😳😳

Well now lets talk about the amazing update😃😃


"Zoya, the door is closed and locked. But if it still makes you uncomfortable, then I won't push it," Asad made clear, resigning to his fate. He removed Zoya's hands from her bra and mechanically took over the job of hooking it back. Zoya watched him silently, falling into deep thought.
I loved how you showed their hesitation...It isn't just about being physical but doing everything right and I loved how Asad understood her😳😳



"Zoya, we started way before that, since the time you unsuspectingly walked into my well-organized life, even if you and I hadn't become us yet. We just didn't know it then," Asad corrected her, a small smile growing on his face.
I loved that they strarted talking about their past and reminiscing about their past...
Makes it so realistic and sweet...😳😳When something good happens you always think about the road to that and you portrayed that beautifully Green😳😳



Zoya explained carefully, not entirely sure herself about why she changed her mind. All she knew is that everything had finally fallen into place, and it just felt... right.
These lines are perfect...I belive there is no perfect moment for anything..you may plan a lot but sometimes things may not go according to plan..just do it when it feels right😳😳



Her hands fell away immediately, when Asad took a sudden step forward, pressing his lips against hers as he claimed them. She felt his hands trail up to her shoulders, brushing away the straps and finally removing the bra from her body altogether.
I loved how showed Zoya's hesitation and worry when Asad took his time...So finally the bra is off😆😆Good thing Zoya did half the job this time😆😆😆



Zoya gasped and allowed Asad's urgent tongue to enter her mouth, as it battled with her own. She felt Asad's hands fondle her breasts gently, and she felt a rush of tingle of energy zap through her upper body, ending in a slight throbbing between her thighs.
Hawwt hawwt hawwt☺️☺️☺️I was blushing so hard while reading this and I still am...Good thing I am alone right now😆😆



Her fingers darted aimlessly, and she brushed an unusual hardness below the belt, making her gasp and pull her hand back. A soft rumble echoed in the silence of the room as Asad unsuccessfully suppressed his laughter at the back of his throat.
Ohk so the paras that followed were super hawttt...i know this was your first time writing something like this but it was hawtt and yet not too much...It was just perfect Green😳😳And man i couldn't stop blushing and smiling when i read the word 'hard'☺️☺️☺️


"Aapka OCD ka ata pata hi nahi raha," Zoya giggled as she turned to look at the mess upon hearing the clutter of items hit the ground. Asad growled playfully as he nipped her ear and placed her on the desk again, making her giggle more.
Haha i love that even in the most romantic moments they don't fail to tease each other...I love how you maintain the essence of the characters in every possible situation perfectly😃


"You know, it's not true that I'm never satisfied with you, Mr Khan. I'm more than satisfied today... many times over," Zoya commented, giggling as Asad blew on her face playfully while she spoke.
I love Zoya's naughty side...she was never the one to shy away and I am glad she didn't here either😳


"I'm satisfied that you're satisfied," Asad replied cheekily, as Zoya lifted her head and rested it on his chest, listening to his heartbeat. He wrapped his arm around her shoulders and held her close that way, dropping a kiss on the top of her head. And this was going to last... forever.
Perfect lines to end a perfect story Green...As I said i know you will give us the happily ever after and you did make us wait for long but the wait was totally worth it😃


About the note,I knew how uncomfortable this update has been to write but you did an amazing job Green...It was the perfect combination of hawtness,sweetness,teasing nad romance...I love the light moments between Asya..they balance the hawtness perfectly...

About their first time being in office...I think when you want something and you feel its right it isn't about where or when you are its about the time and if they felt it was the right time I am happy😃

Haha and you last line may be a little lame but its perfect...you know how much I love happily ever afters...

About your next story...I may or may not watch QH,i may not feel for Asya anymore but if my Green writes something her Anu will always be there to read it😃😃

Thanku for this wonderful story Green...It was your most hilarious one so far and I enjoyed every bits of it especially when I was there😆😆😆This story is very close to my heart Green and thanku for making this such a woderful experience...


Love you loads meri Green❤️❤️
Edited by anushreemishra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely ending...loved it to bits...will miss this one...don't stop writing dear...you'll have all ur readers with you😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Completely wrong!😡
You will always have readers that will follow you, including me!
I know you don't send pms, so it will be really hard to find your stories in the fanfiction forum, but I will happily come over and try finding them. You will always have readers! Even I don't want to be on this forum anymore. After 🤬 change, I only comment on fanfiction nothing else. I am still watching the show and liking it but I refuse to be part of a bais forum. Wherever you decide to upload your new work, I will follow it always👍🏼
I don't like office romance but I am not against it! I am sorry if my comments ever offended or troubled you... I believe in honest comments and I really am a fan😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goingreen



Hahaha oops, then you might not like what's coming :p How'd you know the story is ending!! Well I have thought of another one, but I don't know if I'll write it haha. Let's see (: Glad you like my stories (:

Gosh I feel like I am spamming your story now but after your note I realized you read and probably replied to my comment SO I tried to find it...
I know you are smarter than Gul and basically a really good writer, so you won't stretch your story. Sequal are good but pointless dragging is stupid and like I said you are a good writer, so kind of knew you wouldn't do it.
My stance is a personal one. I don't want to sit or touch furniture where others have gotten busy! Don't mean to be explicit here but I don't want to touch or see the residue... Sadly, in real life I have seen two used condoms... once in school (when I was 15) and another time right outside the office (co-op placement) which was REALLY bizarre. Bizarre because there was underwear as well and I was 16. Now I am 19 and after those experiences, I am not squeamish about it and I can deal with it but I would rather not see it.
Posted: 11 years ago
LAST PART?! :O
You better be writing a new story, Green! >:(
Res. :)
Unresss. :P
It's over! It definitely was your craziest story, but we all loved it! Even though you tortured us countless times with your cruel cliffies. 😆
You're an awesome writer, and of course people will read your next story! 😡 Don't be silly. 😆
My favorite parts were the cute little romances between Asad and Zoya in the office. 😳 Just the little kisses and stuff like that. ❤️ Especially when they fell asleep and he kissed her on the nose, a while ago. AW.
So, pleasepleaseplease write something new! 😭 Hurry up and get an idea, will you? 😆
Here's to the end of a fantastic journey! LOVE! 🤗
-Fari. 😳 ❤️
Edited by -LiveLoveLaugh- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Last part??????
No no no this cant happen my best ff is finished
Plzzz plzzz write another story
Plzzz
Pretty plzzz
And for the update i dont have words
Its so so so good

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