AsYa OS: Promises - Page 4

Originally posted by: -Dynamite-

that was too short :'(

nice writing though! :)

Originally posted by: krati5

i hope u don't end it here only... there are still so many things to come up as what happen to aarif & by asad fears i think it is some pblm relate to aarif's disease ... i liked last line most promising each other & all that... if u continue this plz pm me

Preeti, it was beautiful.

Originally posted by: GitaIyer

Preeti, it was beautiful.

Dont' need to know what happened before the meeting 7 years ago, dont need to know what will happen after a month.

The present is so beautifully written and what's left unsaid speaks volumes.

I can actually imagine Zoya voicing those lines with perfect modulation and Asad from feeling guilty to emotional.

Lovely, it was.

Originally posted by: skavya

Awesome dear...

beautifully penned...

Though its a little short its a beautiful piece of work Preeti... You have a way with words and you phrase them beautifully. .. I simply love your writing style. . Do write more.😃

Originally posted by: kaussar

Though its a little short its a beautiful piece of work Preeti... You have a way with words and you phrase them beautifully. .. I simply love your writing style. . Do write more.😃

Originally posted by: PreetiASYArocks

I love your reply Di. Am really glad you liked it!😃

Happy Hug Day!🤗

Very very nice! Their emotions perfectly portrayed! Beautiful Preeti! ❤️

so sad. but written amzingly.