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Preeti

@FaultInMyStars

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: -Dynamite-
that was too short :'(

nice writing though! :)

Thank you. Actually it was meant to be a drabble!😃

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Preeti

@FaultInMyStars

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: krati5
i hope u don't end it here only... there are still so many things to come up as what happen to aarif & by asad fears i think it is some pblm relate to aarif's disease ... i liked last line most promising each other & all that... if u continue this plz pm me

I would love to continue. If I do, I will pm you.😃

Am glad you liked it.

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GitaIyer

@GitaIyer

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Preeti, it was beautiful.

Dont' need to know what happened before the meeting 7 years ago, dont need to know what will happen after a month.

The present is so beautifully written and what's left unsaid speaks volumes.

I can actually imagine Zoya voicing those lines with perfect modulation and Asad from feeling guilty to emotional.

Lovely, it was.

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Preeti

@FaultInMyStars

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: GitaIyer
Preeti, it was beautiful.
Dont' need to know what happened before the meeting 7 years ago, dont need to know what will happen after a month.
The present is so beautifully written and what's left unsaid speaks volumes.
I can actually imagine Zoya voicing those lines with perfect modulation and Asad from feeling guilty to emotional.
Lovely, it was.

I love your reply Di. Am really glad you liked it!😃

Happy Hug Day!🤗

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Preeti

@FaultInMyStars

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: skavya
Awesome dear...
beautifully penned...

Thank you😳

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taznim

@kaussar

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Though its a little short its a beautiful piece of work Preeti... You have a way with words and you phrase them beautifully. .. I simply love your writing style. . Do write more.😃

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Preeti

@FaultInMyStars

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: kaussar
Though its a little short its a beautiful piece of work Preeti... You have a way with words and you phrase them beautifully. .. I simply love your writing style. . Do write more.😃

Actually it was meant to be a drabble. I am happy to know that you liked it!😃