AsYa OS: Promises - Page 2

Originally posted by: Chahanya

Touching

Could you continue like a TS or max 3 parts

I would really love to see AsYa together as a team taking care of their ailing child; how Arif and Asad come t know each other; Arif gets to meet his dad and they spend time

Miss U Abbu he has that toy so cute

It reminded me a bit of Kaash where a divorced couple come together for their who has very little time

He passes away and the only thing his mother says to his father "bring me back my child" The end of the movie was the parents beginning their life again.

Awesome TG I logged back

Originally posted by: divc

Okay this is sad man , I hope the little kiddo lives 🥺 I'm always a sucker for stories like this but yours was too short 😡 😆 You totally need to continue 😳

Originally posted by: Prizi

It's awesumm...
Made me emotional

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

So very poignant!

You write with such clarity! And I am so impressed by your language command. This work of yours is so beautiful.

It also brought me back to a scene from Humsafar, where something similar happened.

Very touching. Touched a certain unknown chord in my heart!

Impressive piece of work this is!

Thanks for sharing this with us!

Originally posted by: KulfiBai

Preetiii don't frickin' end it there PUH-LEASE!

I loved it! You're a fab writer :)

Seriously, don't end it there. Write another part? :D

Originally posted by: PreetiASYArocks

Thanks for so many compliments!🤗

Actually I imagined Khirad in that little scene!😳

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

And I had Asher in mine.

🤗

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awesome + emotional os...👍🏼

Just love it...😊

Super se uper wala os...😉 😊