Asya FF: THE DARK SHADOWS *thread 2 link added *5/5/14* - Page 63

Originally posted by: Riddhimamallik

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That hurt really bad man. It was too touchy. Brilliantly depicted. Poor asad. I feel so bad for him yaar. And asya scene! 👏 👏 No romantic lines but had so much of depth. Damn! You are one great writer eshita.

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Originally posted by: aksasya

So cute and iinnocent part...Poor Asad...but he hav Zoya now...

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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

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Nice update
Poor asad, he hide his pain from everyone
Now he want to show it to zoya
Zoya was feeling bad for him, she wants to help him
The way asad stopped her was amazing
Nice song
Continue soon
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Originally posted by: anopama

nice update
so dilshad is his ammi
but was it her who hurt him
made he got all those wounds the day before
thy said h went to meet dilshad khan
so y do he hat hi family what happen
between his ammi,abbu and brother
that he dont want to see them
poor baby was bleeding and zoya tried to help
but he wanted to be left alone
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Originally posted by: noesha

Thats beautiful :)

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Originally posted by: gowtu

It hurt ready bad..
Feel so sad for him..
Nd zoya song was really sweet...

Heart touchy prt tht was..

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Originally posted by: urvisaini

Very touching indeed

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Originally posted by: -Anitha-

So cute part..
Asad was hurt. Poor him
Loved thefirst aid n kiss.
So beautiful song selection..
I completely loved this part..

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Originally posted by: cuppycake.me

This story has so much layer! So much emotions dude! 😭 My heart went out for my poor baby. You described it so beautifully! I could actually feel everything.
I loved how zoya is falling for him, yet not wanting to fall for him for her bhaijaan's sake!

One thing I would like to say is your story has a touch of reality! I don't know why, and I don't know what other's feel about it, but I feel that it has essence of reality. I love it.

I m sure, asad too has fallen too deeply for her because, why would he show his helplessness to her when he had never done this before! But again, he wont accept it! Its asad we are talking about!!!! 😆 Also, zoya is 7 years younger to him! Wo bhi ek problem dikhta hai usko! Idiot jackass! 😡

All in all, a very heart touching and extremely well written part. And not forget, the song. What selection yaar! Amazing song and apt stuaion. I could actually see zoya cradling asad! 😳

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