Asya FF: THE DARK SHADOWS *thread 2 link added *5/5/14* - Page 12

Originally posted by: Kyara.95

Hi

Overall this is a really nice and interesting story and I like it too BUT...

<font size="5">I can't understand why have you copied someOne else's work??!!</font>

<font size="5">Not the whole concept but you have definitely copied a segment from an AR FF 'Mistress against her will' and I am very much sure about this!!!</font>

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<font size="5">This is what you have copy pasted in this FF of yours .</font>

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'So he's just gonna stand there and look at her? Won't he even help? She tried to get up but her stupid heel was still stuck in the rug. Oh god why me? Somehow she twisted her body around and sat up and slipped out her feet from both stilettos. She stood in armaan's penthouse in bare feet with her heel still stuck in the wretched rug. And to make it even better, Armaan mallik was still staring at her as if she didn't belong on planet earth.

Life wasn't fair.

"Good morning sir." Riddhima licked her parched lips. "Sorry about that rug. I'll bring you a new one. Promise." She blabbered on. Oh god why did I need to say that? The damn rug looks expensive.

"Interesting." He raised his eye brows and Riddhima stifled the urge to run out of the door screw interview. No way in hell she's getting this job now. "If your antics are over then can we start the interview?"

"Huh? Interview?" and here she thought he was going to kick her out of the door.

He moved and signalled her to follow him towards his study. "You're not housekeeping are you?"

"No no. I am Riddhima gupta." And she crossed her fingers behind her back praying that the name doesn't ring any bells.

"And?"

Yessshhh. "I..I..meant I am here for interview." And she quickly sat down in front of his plush leather chair.

He gave a barely perceived nod and his face was still devoid of any expressions. Gee a small smile wouldn't kill. He was dressed in black dress suit, his hair cut short and slightly gelled up. And he still looked breath takingly hot with a dark aura of danger around him.

Armaan was staring straight into her eyes and she was shifting uncomfortably on her chair. Then slowly he brought his hand towards her.'

<font size="5">Now common girl!!! Why copy other's work when you yourself could write so well??!!</font>

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I just don't get it :/

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<font size="5">Here's the link to the FF from where you copied this part - (Just to prove my point)</font>

<font size="5">https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3436148/mistress-against-her-will-ar-ff-part-9-pg-82
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m sorry if it offended you. I agree m wrong. But the story had not been updated since oike ages and I didnt know if the author came on9. So that I could ask her regarding it. Also, ITS A WAY TOO SMALL SEGMENT. You cud have pmd me if it bothered u.

n thanks for liking the story

Originally posted by: eshita.kabhi

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

Res

Wat happn to asad...y he alwys hurt zoya...

Fling so sad fr hr..

Plz update soon...

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

Asad 😡

My poor zoya 😭

Anwar is a nice man 😊

God knows what happen to him tht he slapped her 😲

Cont soon

Originally posted by: jawria123

poor Zoya😭i want to slap asad😡

very well written.

Loved the update

continue soon.

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Hey Eshita,

Just wanted to drop in a Hello. I emailed you something.