Asad-Zoya FF: Heartbeat Warfare III Third OS Page 112 - Page 81

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Posted: 11 years ago
LOVED, LOVED, LOVED this OS ! :)
simply brilliant... such a fab. idea to connect the OS's back to the FF that's been my favourite.
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LOVE your A&Z- simply aamaazing! Asad was deff. Heartbeat wala Asad from what I could tell... haven't really been up to date with Emma wala Fic.
Love Zoe as a ammi- she's just terrific. LOVE her. she reminds of what she used to be in HW and you think she would've been grown up and all. yes she has but then she's still so cute and childlike- like talking to Zooni- how adorable when she's trying to tidy up toys around the house and the convo she's having with Zooni and in return, Zooni keeps throwing out a toy. Or her relationship with her daddy dearest- that pov of zooni was subtle & I really enjoyed that. haha @ zooni becoming a rockstar and so realistic in terms of Asad already thinking Zooni to become a doctor, or what's sensible enough and LOL @ Asad high on meds and talking about Zoe's weight gain.
So cuteee. Lovin' these family oriented OS! :D
Pleease, continuee this- I love the idea of a day out with daddy and even continue one with when Zooni's a grownup- possibly a scenario where she has to decided a career and it's not becoming a doctor or even when she tells her parents that she really looking forward to this guy she's met for a long while and wants to marry him.
I'd lovee to see something like that. <33
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh my i loved this!!! its amazing!
i lved Asad-zooni bonding...its adoable!
Asad-high on meds is hilarious bt not as zoya was! LOL!🤣
wud love the next OS with the daughters...its gonna be awesome i'm sure!👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res😃
Daddy daddy cool, daddy daddy cool 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wondurful one Noe !!
This one goes so well with the background of the story ...You again brought us to the hospital where it all started and when I read the title I was scared coz although I have heard a lot bout appendix I don't know how serious a disease it is!😕
But Sagar turne alll the tables 😆 I was rofling all time reeading the hospital scene 🤣
Asad in that condition and talking stuff ...exactly such a thing happened with my friend once and she had said a funny thing too 😆
The name' Sagar ' has suddenly become soo cool!!😳🤣
And Zoonii...she is sooo soo adorable ...I wish I could grab kiss her 😆and she gives a tough time to zoya ...par abbu ka naam lete hi madam becomes a good girl 😆and her scene with asad looking out in the dark holding his leg ...

She looked up smiling. Asad felt satisfied seeing her smile and got back to the conversation. Zooni observed the outside world holding onto his leg. Now the darkness didn't scare her.
That was my fav moment 😳
And there are more such moments I loved that the comment would get too too long😆
And yeah I got the same asad from HW 😳 But the is one change ...He is not afraid of zoya's cooking anynore 😆
Waiting for DADDY'S DAY OUT ...am already imagining four of them zooming down the road gng for a picnic 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
This is very cute n lovely story
I love der bonding
How they spent time n all
Nn Zooni discription was amazing
Wonderful story
N if u r writing some more OS like this then do continue it
Would love to read that
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Posted: 11 years ago
Your story was awesome. A truly good and heartwarming story in a slew of poorly written plots. It reminded me of the reason why I started reading fanfiction. Thanks and keep up the good work
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was mesmerizing...loved every bit of this😳...I've always wanted to read about Heartbeat-wala AsYa and their baby😳...one more os on them?😲...you are a sweetheart Noe🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful storyyy... 😊
loved the characters 😉
AMAZINGGG 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey, read the entire FF and the 3 OS's in just over 24hrs and it was amazing.. Really like how you had incorporated medical facts in the story.. The last OS was the best one so far.. There's something about Asad with a baby that has me all dreamy-eyed..
Please pm me when you update the next OS and when you update your other FF..
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Posted: 10 years ago
This story...
is special...
indeed speacial for me...
i cand read it thrice...
its one of those writings, which always comes to mind when I think about AsYa...
Its special...
Thanks Noeee for such an amazing story...

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