Asad-Zoya FF: Heartbeat Warfare III Third OS Page 112 - Page 79

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Superb OS Noe 👏

Asad and zoya make cute parents

Zoya has become a lil strict whereas asad has developed a laid back attitude

Quite interesting

A high asad was hilarious 😆

Zooni is too cute 😃

Overall a delightful read 😊

Firstly I wasn't expecting for Asad and Zoya to be parents and for such a cute and adorable little bundle to be a part of their life. Zooni is a beautiful name and even more beautifully etched character, how freaking cute was she all through. The star of the OS 😃 AND I am so happy to know we'll have more of her. I love your characters from Heartbeat warfare and how I hope you would have a sequel to it 😛.

I love Zoya 😆 she's such a child herself. The way she talks and behaves with Asad and Zooni is endearing and her jealousy that Zooni is allowed to make mess and noise as compared to herself was cute 😆. Zoya's character in your story is so mature, but yet retains so much of herself, her jovial strong willed self.

Asad and Zoya are nothing without the bickering and their one to one is so enjoyable to read here too.

Obviously I have a soft corner for father and daughter bonds and moments and Asad's bond with Zooni just pleases the heart so much. Small moments like hugging her closer, looking at her when she's staring at him and both sharing smiles, talking less but still sharing such an understanding.

That scene when Asad was throwing up and in pain, your description is perfect. It's hard to write medical issues and problems so neatly and convincingly and you've done a beyond perfect job at it so far. The scene in the hospital when he was a little high and the revelations were funny 😆 and the way you made Zoya confront him so subtly in the end made it even more interesting.

I really enjoyed the OS, it was wonderful. 😃 I can't wait for more.

Babies are fascinating angels.

'My Abbu always encouraged me. What others thought to be a noise, he found music in it.'

"You know this is the first time I will use the insurance for myself. You have been enjoying its benefits so far."

Entertaining! 😉

A medication induced Asad, inimitable and refreshingly welcome. 😃

"Asad was looking at her. Zoya turned her gaze towards Asad and saw that he was intently looking at her."

"She doesn't annoy me."

"Per haan...she keeps asking me if she looks fat and that is very very very annoying."

"And, I am not even lying. Her weight gain was moderate and it has been a year now. Aur, mera nahi to weighing scale ka to yakeen kar le. She is hardly 3-4 kg more than what she used to be. Architect ki maths to doctor se bhi achhi honi chahiye, but it seems she can't do simple difference calculation. I am thinking ke ye Zooni ko maths nahi seekhayegi."

Very Very Very Endearing! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️