AsYa SS: Winner Takes All ; Ch 7, Pg 66, 23/04/14

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: nilusoni
very nice
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon

Thanks dear. will PM

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: --Radhika--
Res (:
Unres! 😆

Finally, you updated!! I love how you start every update with a Q&A! 😃😃
Chapter 4 was superb, Rashid and Gaffur battle off. Zoya was in love with someone else? 😲😲😲 Shocker.
Loved the update, continue soon! (: <33

Yeah finally!!! Thanks...I try to address the issues that are coming up in the comments.

Glad u liked it. Yup the battle lines have been drawn. Yeah I mentioned in chapter 2 itself about Ayaan.

Thanks..will update next weekend.

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: _Seera_
Rivs...
Just read all parts in one go... Nice story.. :)

So you plan Rashid's redemption here also???? 😆

Thanks darling.

Nope...Rashid can never be redeemed in my eyes. So no chance.

Rivs

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

What a nice update it was :D

Rashid is such a !@#$%^&&*
anyway seems so very interesting :D
DI PULLEZZEEE LONGER CHAPTERS NA :(

Thanks Ankie...long time no see.

Rashid is a jerk yes, and I get inspired everytime AAK calls him Abbu.

I cannot make the chapters any longer since my chapter bank is getting over and I have not had time to write😭.

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: yashasvi_88
ineteresting update. Waiting to read the next part and please try to make the updates longer if possible.

This is the longest I can make them...Thanks for the comments

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GoodGoneWrong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa
Hey Rivz that was an amazing update.

Rashid is so cheap, even after so many years wants to take revenge on Gafoor. But one thing is sure he does know his son well and thats the reason he wants to get Asad married to Zoya.

Gafoor was so insensitive towards his own daughter and now just wants to get her married to get rid of his responsibility.

Hope ASYA unite soon and that Zoya love Asad back and not Ayaan.

Thanks for the pm n please pmme for the next part too.

Thanks dear.

Yeah I can make Rashid really cheap. I hate that character a lot. 😆 He is using his son bas. He is not thinking of Asad's good at all.

Gaffur is just a silly old man stuck in the 17th century.😆

AsYa union will happen soon...😆

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jasminerose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#257

Hey this is getting more interesting and gripping with every update. I am so curious to know about the lover boy and how all this plays out. The title and the story are intriguing me now. Very well written. Enjoyed reading it. Asad has a gleam in his eyes when they talk about Zoya, really wanna know more on this.