AsYa SS-The Boundaries That Separate Us Chapter 16 Updated Page 101 - Page 53

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Lovely update

Thanks @Kritz ^_^

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Sorry for Post Crashing this post..
But I guess we have 2 yaa 3 OS..where You can read Zoya taking care of Asad..and yes even I haven't read any full story like SS / FF on such lines.

YES there is!! Read Kaussar's stories. I haven't been active for a long time, but she writes beautiful ones and you can find Zoya taking care of Asad...a lot.

Originally posted by: FaultInMyStars

YES there is!! Read Kaussar's stories. I haven't been active for a long time, but she writes beautiful ones and you can find Zoya taking care of Asad...a lot.

Kaussar ki woh SS incomplete hai..
But then I was talking about Bano's and Bubble's OS's...they have wonderful yet cute take on this..
And Faasle' I have read...maybe my first story..I have came across before joining this forum..Brilliant story..par usme Caring part thoda hee haina...yaa hai bhi so yaad nahi mujhe.

Hey Preeti,

Look Preeti..What I feel about this story is that...if a story have DUPATTA ROMANCE..then only that story will be convincing..it is not the fact...and I guess you have read plainly simple yet beautiful stories as such..
So according to me..you are going great...with this one..
Because we are dealing with a serious issue..here like cancer so he can't just runn off and catch her from falling or beat the goons..black and blue..
So yes this track of practical and logical things are perfecto for this story..
THIS IS MY P.O.V.
Rest you can see others also.
And I was wondering..PM's ka kya hua.?

Originally posted by: _.Mehak._

reserved

I'm late :'(

Aww no worries next time! XP 😆

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Look Preeti..What I feel about this story is that...if a story have DUPATTA ROMANCE..then only that story will be convincing..it is not the fact...and I guess you have read plainly simple yet beautiful stories as such..
So according to me..you are going great...with this one..
Because we are dealing with a serious issue..here like cancer so he can't just runn off and catch her from falling or beat the goons..black and blue..
So yes this track of practical and logical things are perfecto for this story..
THIS IS MY P.O.V.
Rest you can see others also.
And I was wondering..PM's ka kya hua.?

Yeah I feel along the same lines as well. Thanks.
I need to do a bit of work about cancer * I write a project and read a book about it 2-3 years back, so I don't really remember much*..so that's why the next to next update, that is chapter 12, is gonna be updated after 20th July or something. I have to leave for college in 14 days, so I wanna spend all my time with my family now. Hence, I hope you guys will understand.
About PMs, well my Broadband ain't working, and mobile Internet is too slow. So sending out PMs isn't an option right now. Once I get back to college, I will resume it.

Kaussar left it incomplete? I guess she is busy with life then. Yes, they write beautiful and super cute stories :D
Faasle is more of an epic. Nah I don't remember Zoya taking care of Asad as well *but may be there was, when he was using a crutch or something, I don't remember that part very well* but overall it's the most beautiful story I have ever read.

Originally posted by: _.Mehak._

Hey Preeti,

Hwz u

Just read the update

Update was as usual awesome

I love those little moments you add to your story... Like that Zoya Asad and Dilshad scene, It was really cute

Zoya and Dilshaad relationship is really adorable I must say, they are more like mother-daughter

I loooved the update

Dilshad-Asad Best mother-son relationship I guess :)

Thank you so much for making a effort to pen down such a beautiful story. You make so much effort for all of us... Thank you for that

Love-

Mehak :)

Thanks Mehak.
I am glad you like them...yes they are awesome!!! They are just awesome the way they are...all thanks to the CVs who made them and the actors who played them to perfection.
You shouldn't thank me for it at all. I love making stories about the characters who inspire me, and penning it down is a bit tough for me I admit * I am too lazy for it* but hey, posting them here and seeing all of your comments is very worth it. It's kind of an an inspiration. So thank you. And if you wanna thank someone, thank yourself. ^_^ <3

Originally posted by: FaultInMyStars

Yep she did...and she forgot because she had pretty traumatic experiences that certain day, so it's like the memory stayed buried deep inside somewhere, only to get back when such a strong catalyst was used.

Thank you Binu for liking this ^_^

Next update kal ko.

of course...
we can't blame dilshaad in that situation...
you portrayed dilshad as an amazing lady..
any one in her place react only in this way..
because at that time she is lossing her life...
waiting for tomorrow...